JC Brul Poet Tanka

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Dancing Daffodil

dancing daffodil
in yellow and scarlet hue
glowing like the sun
saying bye to winter blues
spring's blooms knocking at my door


12 March 2022

Springtime Beauty Tanka Poetry Contest
Sponsored by M.L. Kiser


Notes: My daffodil bloomed this evening. The bliss I felt seeing her sublime beauty, I couldn't contain. The photo is the actual picture I've taken.

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Sam Kauffman April 12, 2022 at 12:21 PM Congratulations JCB! I was sure I had commented on this lovely, floral gem! Sigh! So glad to see it on the winners list. Such elation expressed for the beauty of a new, spring blossom! Happy Easter my friend!

Len Gasun April 12, 2022 at 1:06 AM Wow! Beautiful! I love it. Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Thanks for sharing! God bless!

Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2022 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on this pretty win. A creative write. "dancing daffodil" may I have the next dance??? Enjoy your win with blessings.........................

Caren Krutsinger April 9, 2022 at 12:35 AM You seem to be on a daffodil "tear" and it suits you!

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2022 at 8:58 PM Congrats. Love how you used yellow and scarlet together

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 8, 2022 at 6:49 PM Congratulations! Lovely Tanka welcoming Spring!

Valsa George March 16, 2022 at 1:30 AM It is not simply knocking at your door.... It has found a place inside.... ! Love your tanka, Jez !

Deb M March 12, 2022 at 5:15 PM Hi JCB…..love this poem….bright happy and just lovely! The title drew me in. Debx

Paulette Calasibetta March 12, 2022 at 10:46 AM Beautiful photo for a beautiful Tanka. Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 12, 2022 at 9:26 AM Wow! What a beautiful springtime Tanka! Spring is on the way! Love ~ Mala