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dancing daffodil in yellow and scarlet hue glowing like the sun saying bye to winter blues spring's blooms knocking at my door 12 March 2022 Springtime Beauty Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by M.L. Kiser Notes: My daffodil bloomed this evening. The bliss I felt seeing her sublime beauty, I couldn't contain. The photo is the actual picture I've taken.

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Date: 4/12/2022 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations JCB! I was sure I had commented on this lovely, floral gem! Sigh! So glad to see it on the winners list. Such elation expressed for the beauty of a new, spring blossom! Happy Easter my friend!
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Date: 4/12/2022 1:06:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful! I love it. Congratulations on your win my dear friend! Thanks for sharing! God bless!
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Date: 4/10/2022 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this pretty win. A creative write. "dancing daffodil" may I have the next dance??? Enjoy your win with blessings.........................
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Date: 4/9/2022 12:35:00 AM
You seem to be on a daffodil "tear" and it suits you!
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Date: 4/8/2022 8:58:00 PM
Congrats. Love how you used yellow and scarlet together
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Date: 4/8/2022 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely Tanka welcoming Spring!
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Date: 3/16/2022 1:30:00 AM
It is not simply knocking at your door.... It has found a place inside.... ! Love your tanka, Jez !
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Date: 3/12/2022 5:15:00 PM
Hi JCB…..love this poem….bright happy and just lovely! The title drew me in. Debx
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Date: 3/12/2022 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful photo for a beautiful Tanka. Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/12/2022 9:26:00 AM
Wow! What a beautiful springtime Tanka! Spring is on the way! Love ~ Mala
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