Dancing Clouds - Cloud Contest

Clouds beautifully, float by with grace
Like a whisper floating in the breeze
Twisting like lovers in an embrace
They hide the sun as if to tease
A ballet of meringue aiming to please.

As if on time the heavier clouds appear
Like  the baddie  in any musical show
Pushing the dainty clouds creating a tear
Who then cry gently on the watchers below
As nature creates a beautiful rainbow .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:03 AM
another nice winning poem.. enjoyed...PD
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:43 AM
Unique creative winning work.Congrats..Sara
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:17 PM
hmm unique is that another way of saying not nice, lol Sara I am joking you ...Seren
Morgan Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Seren Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thank you Morgan for your comment/....Seren
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 9:01 AM
"A ballet of meringue aiming to please" wow........I love that unique idea of the clouds! This was a beauty !! Congratulations!
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 3:15 PM
Thanks Carrie...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on your place on the winners list Sass building quite a rep here love xx
Roberts Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 2:46 AM
Mandy have missed you, hugssss...Seren
A  Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:30 PM
congratulations Seren, ~Love ~~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Thank you SKAT......Seren
Gorelick Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest..thank you for supporting it. BG
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Thank you BG I am glad I got the form correct....Seren
Sirak Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:27 AM
Simply beautiful. Love the ballet images, and the way you wounded something beautiful and created more beauty.
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Thanks you Monterey ....Seren
Sivey Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:38 AM
Gorgeous, simply a gorgeous write my friend! This is a beautiful and ingenious poem Seren! I really loved reading this elaborately wondrous piece this morning! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Russell ......Seren
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