Dancing Blind

“Music is the wine that fills the cup of silence.” — Robert Fripp

 “If one does not dance blind, one will fail to see what they feel and without feel, no dance is real.  Professional dancers work hard to ensure their thinking is concealed.” --- Poet


To dance, leave the world behind. To breathe and sway, step away from descriptions of boy’s and girl’s dancing roles as overly written. Enter dimensions where soul senses unfurl. Be rid of the five senses, use moves heaven dispenses.
Our souls cry for brains to lose control, to relax stance and uninhibitedly dance. Thinking is bound to be caught by a thought that is not dance sought. Those who rely on only their body’s reply may better dance than those whose eyes surmise, ears hear fears, feel is not real, nose is posed and/or taste may abase. Vibrations fuel the blood, elations pump the heart, muscles forget where they begin and if they stop. Jubilance sets a rhythm where no notes are given heed. Sensations seed the body with an intoxicating feed ~ ~ Arms are floating, flying, winged- completely marveling Legs are fluid - their confidence undisputed; Bodies are carefree - completely lost in melody; Heads and necks feel nimble - exceptionally kindled; Feet are agile - moves uniquely styled.
When one desires to dance, they must aspire to move without an earthly stance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Roper Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Hello my friend, I love your poem, but could you remove "Eve Roper's DANCING BLIND CONTEST"? Poetry rules don’t allow anything inside the poem except the poem itself, so the date or contest should not be included in the note box.
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 8:36 PM
😊
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2026 at 2:02 PM
Oh, how sweet of you to come and tell me when I'm sure the contest is business enough. I appreciate it, Eve and will dance through the necessary moves after sending this. THANKS CayCay
Borg Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 8:47 PM
I would think any poet who writes like you do would be a great dancer. I feel you're going to waltz through this competition and wow the judge. slow, slow, quick-quick, slow.
DiMino Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 5:41 AM
"Enter dimensions where soul senses unfurl. Be rid of the five senses, use moves heaven dispenses." -- Love that! "Thinking is bound to be caught by a thought that is not dance sought" -- So True! This applies to every art: train, train, until you become the essence. Then let the essence loose, trusting in connections that transcend mere body and mind. "Arms are floating, flying, winged- completely marveling Legs are fluid - " I see you in your marvelous freedom, sailing across the dance floor. Fly and soar! You get a FAVE!
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 2:09 AM
Wow. You did superb work with this one, Caycay. It came straight from your heart. I bet it will score really high in the contest. I didn't even know how the heck to approach this theme
Hind Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 7:14 PM
woah...soaring through your words, a marvelous and sensory ride!! ❤️
Crandall Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 1:56 PM
Nice, your internal rhymes keep it moving like good dance moves, as you're leaving earth to dance!
Godwin Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 2:23 PM
For years now, my dancing has been confined to the living room, but I love the freedom feel wherever I am. (APPARENTLY, I can't do traditional slow dancing because every guy I've tried with says I'm leading (even Dad) but I'm not aware of it to stop it. I took waltzing lessons from a pro in my 40s but he kept saying I was leading w/o suggesting how I might stop. I can do the 'we've both had drinks' type of slow dancing. You needed to know all that apparently.) CayCay
Sharma  Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 9:42 PM
Wowww! I absolutely love this heavenly take on the prompt, dear CayCay, you absolutely extracted the essence of what dancing blind means! That too in such an ethereal and soulful manner! 😍🫂🥹 When one forgets the five senses and just lets the feet glow with the fluidity of the rhythms... I can feel it close to my heart as dancing was the passion I possessed, before my health hindered that ... And then poetry accepted me! Hmm, sometimes I wish I had never left dancing.. "Sensations seed the body with an intoxicating feed ~ ~ Arms are floating, flying, winged-" How immaculate and smooth! Filled with the opulence of those moments, absolutely gorgeous, best of luck to you for the contest! A FAVE this is ~ 💃🏻🌙💫✨
Godwin Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:57 PM
I VERY MUCH appreciate your FAVE. Also, thank you for commenting on other poems while I was 'not here.' I know what it is to have your life/passion stolen by life. Many do, right? I felt all you wrote and pray you are led towards all that fills your empty spaces with fulfillment and joy. Seems you're on an excellent start with poetry and upbeat thoughts. I don't want to detail my journey in this box, but I will share this: I left Soup in 9/2019 and wrote a poem called, "Diminished" when I returned on 1/29/2025. If you wish to relate to how I relate to you, feel free to read it. I fractured my skull / concussed just over 2 decades ago, it was an everything-changing event, a journey of many roads, blah, etc. I'm confident you relate. I'll hold you in my prayerful thoughts. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 7:01 PM
So interesting! Gliding with your amazing words!
Godwin Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 12:41 PM
It's hard enough sometimes just to write the poems that begin the verbal volleys. Aint life grand? CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 10:21 AM
It seems responding has its difficulties as does commenting. ✍️📖 Thank you, CayCay! ❤️
Godwin Avatar
September 20, 2026 at 12:26 AM
I know I wrote you a reply, but one no longer shows. Who do we suppose I wrote it to/for/what? I expressed my delight, Kim, over 'gliding' and 'amazing' as used by you. Thank you very much ... CayCay
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