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Dancers

shuttered light striates melded skin, they lie amazed; an ocean passed through them tossed them beyond dark depths, bore them on frothy waves, landed them on a distant shore…. now cloistered, their bodies gravitate seek each other, fold together, fold apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/28/2025 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/16/2020 9:04:00 AM
Beautiful! Very sensual and real. This is great poetry!
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Desi Gall
Date: 8/16/2020 11:38:00 AM
Very kind of you Joe. Thanks for the feedback.

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