Dance With Me Like No One Is Looking

Dance with me like no one is looking, I'll lead as you follow,
let's stay in this very moment and not worry about tomorrow.
Feel my hand on your shoulder and the other around your waist,
I have finally realized, my darling, you can never be replaced.

I know in the past our relationship regrets were very hard to swallow,
dance with me like no one is looking, I'll lead as you follow.
Evidence of our companionship liberates our honest ways,
so take my hand and love me right as we continue to sway.

Before comprehension our stars were sacred and aligned,
I still can't understand how your devotion made you mine.
Dance with me like no one is looking, I'll lead as you follow,
I'll lead you right to our log cabin in the mountains of Colorado.

Waltzing into the two-step creates a beautiful rendition,
for I'll love you forever without haste and condition.
If you look up high there's your favorite painting by Picasso,
dance with me like no one is looking, I'll lead as you follow.

Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: March 18, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bankson Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:38 AM
That is really beautiful and a great memory I almost forgot.Thanks.7.5
Scars Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Many thanks Jai, have a great day :)-luloo
La France Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Laura, BEAUTIFUL, such a lovely write and I am loving it 7 ~
Scars Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Thank you very much Broken Wings...:)-luloo *smiles*
Sage Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 4:25 AM
that'll be one awesome dance Laura, wish ya the best of tunes
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Creative work..I enjoyed reading it..I see that you did a combining of two poetic forms..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:03 PM
thank you Sara :)-luloo
Tudor Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:27 PM
There's nothing makes one feel more alive than the dance of romance...well done. J.
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:02 PM
Thank you J :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:59 PM
beautiful quatern LuLoo I have rarely written in this form and you made this flow so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx7
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:02 PM
Thank you Jan :)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:55 PM
- A wonderful and romantic dance - Beautiful written, Laura - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:01 PM
thank you Anne-Lise :)-luloo
Mcconnell Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Superb waltz Laura, really enjoyed being swooshed round the floor!, this was a lovely piece enjoyed every line!
Scars Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Gordon :)-luloo
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