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Dance With Me

Sway, sway so soft Back and forth swaying near motionless holding on so tight blending, merging melting together rocking your baby doll to sweet silver blue... Now gliding, waltzing Cajun waltzing Jolie Blon waltzing so smooth, so elegant so easy and tuned in like skating on ice... Slow-shag shuffle Beach sounds on the juke box barefoot on a sandy floor Platters, Drifters, Temptations Intricate, delicate movement Shuffle to the seagull's call to the warm gulf breeze to the pounding rhythm of the sea... Now shake it, shake a tail-feather bend over let me see you shake a tail feather sweaty, salty, sexy shaking C'mon baby shake it on down shake it on down with me... Last verse based on the song: 'Shake a Tail-Feather' by James & Bobby Purify

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Date: 8/1/2013 11:20:00 PM
it's an awesome win.... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/30/2013 8:39:00 AM
Tim, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
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Date: 4/9/2013 10:26:00 PM
That poem takes years back, very nicely written Jim, the words brought out the sound, as if i was listening to the music. Congratulation on your win. Love Terry
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:46:00 PM
TIM, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome free verse poem, in Catie's contest....good night , LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:05:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Oh racy one ;)Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2013 12:20:00 AM
Wow..I love this one Tim..It got my soul dancing and my toes tip: )
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:42:00 PM
Wow! I can see that you are a dancer. I'm sorry that I can't dance with you. I stopped dancing years ago. This sounds lke a song. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/4/2013 11:56:00 AM
You captured the magic of dancing so well, Tim! I LOVE to dance. Thanks for sharing this magical piece and thank your comment on my work!
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Date: 3/4/2013 8:47:00 AM
hi hi hi dear friend Tim... very amazing write :) impressive dance :) <3 am dancing with your :) <3 luv and lights :) Sk
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Date: 3/3/2013 6:53:00 AM
Tim, know wonder all of ladies below are queuing up, you smoothy you...David
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Date: 3/2/2013 5:56:00 PM
Your title sounds like an invitation.....however it looks like a lot of ladies got here first! I'll have to wait my turn! :)
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Date: 3/2/2013 4:35:00 PM
I'm shakin'.and lovin' it
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