Dance With Me

Sway, sway so soft
Back and forth swaying
near motionless
holding on so tight
blending, merging
melting together
rocking your baby doll
to sweet silver blue...

Now gliding, waltzing
Cajun waltzing
Jolie Blon waltzing
so smooth, so elegant
so easy and tuned in like
skating on ice...

Slow-shag shuffle
Beach sounds on the juke box
barefoot on a sandy floor
Platters, Drifters, Temptations
Intricate, delicate movement
Shuffle to the seagull's call
to the warm gulf breeze
to the pounding rhythm of the sea...

Now shake it, shake a tail-feather
bend over let me see you
shake a tail feather
sweaty, salty, sexy shaking
C'mon baby shake it on down
shake it on down with me...

Last verse based on the song: 'Shake a Tail-Feather' by James & Bobby Purify
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 1, 2013 at 11:20 PM
it's an awesome win.... LOVE ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Tim, , congratulations... with your sweet win... luv.. Linda
Bacha Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 10:26 PM
That poem takes years back, very nicely written Jim, the words brought out the sound, as if i was listening to the music. Congratulation on your win. Love Terry
A   Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 9:46 PM
TIM, ;-) CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome free verse poem, in Catie's contest....good night , LINDA
Guzzi Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:05 PM
Congrad's on your win. Oh racy one ;)Light & Love
Chircop Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:20 AM
Wow..I love this one Tim..It got my soul dancing and my toes tip: )
Carrillo Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Wow! I can see that you are a dancer. I'm sorry that I can't dance with you. I stopped dancing years ago. This sounds lke a song. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 11:56 AM
You captured the magic of dancing so well, Tim! I LOVE to dance. Thanks for sharing this magical piece and thank your comment on my work!
Komala Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 8:47 AM
hi hi hi dear friend Tim... very amazing write :) impressive dance :) <3 am dancing with your :) <3 luv and lights :) Sk
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Tim, know wonder all of ladies below are queuing up, you smoothy you...David
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 5:56 PM
Your title sounds like an invitation.....however it looks like a lot of ladies got here first! I'll have to wait my turn! :)
Jones Avatar
March 2, 2013 at 4:35 PM
I'm shakin'.and lovin' it
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