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Dance of the Spirit

DANCE OF THE SPIRIT

They sing, you dance
Like a naked child sputtering in the rain
Your feet are wet
Your body soaked with waters and sweat 
You can not control the birth
Every step, a deeper flair
Tell me daughter, where hence the beats come?
Why is the drummer hidden from view?
Whose voice is that song?
Calling you to endless pursuit?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 11:11 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 9, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Pen P, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 10, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Hi Pen Piper, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing - skat
Muideen Avatar
July 29, 2015 at 1:35 AM
Your noble write swims eloquent in the heart of the readers, it sized my attention through the whole read.. Excellent..........A.M.
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July 25, 2015 at 7:51 PM
I enjoyed reading this beautiful powerful piece and I am happy I stumbled across it! Excellent work - well done! It's a 7!! Pandita
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