Kim Merryman Poet Verse

Dance of the Snowflakes - a Waltz Wave

Dance
snowflakes
dance
from your 
icy home
above.
Each
twirl, each
swirl, ballet
perfect as you
pirouette 
your way
down
to the
frozen ground,
where you
take
your last
bow.

11/17/15

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Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2015 at 3:58 PM Fogot to mention I am fav'ing this beauty my friend! Hugs, Connie Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:32 PM Wow! I'm honored, Connie!

Connie Marcum Wong November 21, 2015 at 3:56 PM Wow Kim! This is a top winner for me. Comparing snowfall to ballet is brilliant! I loved it! I also loved the form you chose. It displayed your words superbly. Congratulations on your win! Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:30 PM Thank you for encouraging words, Connie!I'm so glad you liked it!

Lin Lane November 21, 2015 at 4:05 AM That's a lovely concept, Kim. Congratulations. Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thank you, Lin!

Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 3:47 AM Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:29 PM Thanks, Jan!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 21, 2015 at 12:02 AM How lovely Kim.. congrats on awesome first place win! Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:28 PM Thank you, Upma!

Skat A November 20, 2015 at 8:00 PM Kim, Congratulations on your Snow Win. SKAT

Barbara Gorelick November 19, 2015 at 2:23 PM Oh my, this is great..A winner for sure. BG Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:27 PM Thank you, Barbara! So glad you liked it!

Njeri Hunjeri November 18, 2015 at 12:46 PM Wow, very beautiful. i like a lot Kim Merryman November 24, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thank you Njeri! I'm glad you liked it!

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 12:31 PM awesome. SKAT Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:54 PM Thank you, SKAT!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 18, 2015 at 8:15 AM Next dance, please? Thank you! Phantasmagoric, dear Kim. A seven! Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:53 PM I appreciate your encouraging comments, Demetrios! Thank you!

Ilene Bauer November 17, 2015 at 4:54 PM i love the whole dance analogy, kim! you've done a fine job with this one... Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:52 PM Thank you, Ilene! I'm glad you liked it.

Lin Lane November 17, 2015 at 4:28 PM This is so charming. Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:51 PM Thank you, Lin!

Jan Allison November 17, 2015 at 3:29 PM Delightful Kim - I am so glad you introduced this form to us:-) hugs jan xx Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:50 PM Thank you, Jan!

Jill Spagnola November 17, 2015 at 3:05 PM and each as unique as your pen Kim! Delicate and beautiful, best of luck....:), jill Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:49 PM Thank you for your sweet comment, Jill!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2015 at 2:55 PM - Beautiful, Kim - (luckily we do not have snow yet) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Merryman November 22, 2015 at 9:48 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!