Dance of the Demons (The Haunting Continues)

We start our dance
Which we'll dance with great delight
This night my Demon can free me of this Fright
My chest be free from this Blight

His night has come,
The deed shall be done,
With knife in hand
And partner left under my command

Fear starts to flicker across his face
As we kneel to do our disgrace
He smiles as I draw the knife
Why does this not seem right?

His eyes hold no fright
Can't he see this is not right
My body is not it's own
I am locked inside as a drone.

The demon commands us to slaughter
So our knives slice through like water.
Neither of us cares not a bit
As blood from our prey doth spit

His smile falls as I draw the knife
As he sees that I'm no longer his wife
Strife and discord this fool has caused
But is his life the price, so I paused

We revel and rejoice with blood spill
We REALLY do so enjoy the thrill
All I want to do is scream
As this must be a dream

No not  at all a dream
But 'tis the Demons scheme.
Illyanna set this Demon on the go
Time to set upon Robert Celentano


Thanks Illyanna and Martyn love for your help as i could not have done this
without you ,,,thanks John LovingIII for making me be challenged...hope I do
THe Haunted Poets Society proud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Also a good narration, should be enought blood spilled fo a haunting, Moses
Fraser Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Excellent poem Kristy, super read>>James
Devonshire Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 8:02 AM
This is a very spooky "Dance of the Demons," Kristy, and well in keeping with the theme of Johnos' "Haunted Poets Society." I'm sure Robert will make us proud, too! Great work! Love, Carolyn
Hudson Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:29 AM
Way to go! The drama, suspense, makes this haunting more intense.-AA
Goff Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 6:53 PM
deliciously horrific! Kristy! you are a true member of the Haunted Poets Society! SCARE ON ROBERT!!!!
De La Keur Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 5:57 PM
I knew you could do it! I am very glad a chose you! LOVE ILLY
Gorelick Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 5:32 PM
Wow, this litle contest is a winner..youve done yourself proud. Im going to see Demons tonight. BG
Loving Iii Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 5:06 PM
soup mail
Loving Iii Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Proud? you win the prize for most realistic. you have a lot of guys shaking in their boots. afraid to go to sleep tonight.and yet the demon is the realest of them all. this was truly a "Spooky Tale". John Henry Loving III. p.s. by the way; you need a psyciatrist.
De La Keur Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 4:06 PM
Yeah, see you did it. I am so proud of you. See you are twisted, lol. Loved it
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