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Our passion is stillness, entwined with oneness Moment to moment, all moments so entwined Vibrancy of thought rested energised silence Embracing and releasing flow of life with joy Transfixed in bliss borne of divine magnetism Bringing to life hitherto dormant nerve centres All dancing in unison to the music of the spheres ~ as we outpour our pure intent into the vast void Our passion is stillness, in vibrancy of blissfulness Sans ego craving, hollowed out form, a love mist Simply present as a receptor of energy sublime Imbibed by soul and reflected by mind-body Vaporised self impulsed by resonation of bliss Celebrating aliveness propelled by God’s breath At play both within and around our expanding aura ~ as we outpour our pure intent into the vast void 24-May-2022 Your Passion Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 6/4/2022 5:22:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/4/2022 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Gina, happy I could scrape through with this free verse, a form I don’t use much. Enjoyed participating!
Date: 5/30/2022 2:53:00 PM
Congrats, I especially like the 2nd stanza!
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Date: 5/30/2022 11:16:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/29/2022 6:05:00 AM
Such a precious gem written by your golden pen my dear friend US. I love it a lot. Stillness is one of the most wonderful passions I think based from my experiences and as confirmed in your marvelous words. CONGRATULATIONS on your shining win! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you.
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Date: 5/29/2022 7:31:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging words, Len
Date: 5/28/2022 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Date: 5/28/2022 10:27:00 AM
I’m so happy you enjoyed, Paula, thank you :)
Date: 5/24/2022 1:06:00 PM
This poem is incredibly gorgeous in every line in all directions.
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Date: 5/24/2022 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Caren :)

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