Dance of Aliveness

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Our passion is stillness, entwined with oneness
Moment to moment, all moments so entwined
Vibrancy of thought rested energised silence
Embracing and releasing flow of life with joy
Transfixed in bliss borne of divine magnetism 
Bringing to life hitherto dormant nerve centres
All dancing in unison to the music of the spheres

~ as we outpour our pure intent into the vast void

Our passion is stillness, in vibrancy of blissfulness 
Sans ego craving, hollowed out form, a love mist
Simply present as a receptor of energy sublime
Imbibed by soul and reflected by mind-body
Vaporised self impulsed by resonation of bliss
Celebrating aliveness propelled by God’s breath
At play both within and around our expanding aura

~ as we outpour our pure intent into the vast void

24-May-2022

Your Passion Poetry Contest
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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/4/2022 5:22:00 AM

Lovely writing. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2022 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, Gina, happy I could scrape through with this free verse, a form I don’t use much. Enjoyed participating!

L. J. Carber

Date: 5/30/2022 2:53:00 PM

Congrats, I especially like the 2nd stanza!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/30/2022 11:16:00 PM

Thank you!

Len Gasun

Date: 5/29/2022 6:05:00 AM

Such a precious gem written by your golden pen my dear friend US. I love it a lot. Stillness is one of the most wonderful passions I think based from my experiences and as confirmed in your marvelous words. CONGRATULATIONS on your shining win! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/29/2022 7:31:00 AM

Thank you for your encouraging words, Len