Dance For Anne Lise

Even though it hurts to smile,
I can pretend for a little while
That everything is alright

That when I look up at the 
Cinerescent sky and think 
about my life at least

I could say with certainty
that I've never been forsaken 
by the ONE MOST HIGH.....

That I could always count 
on the sun's luminescent rays to

Break through the darkest of clouds 
and soak up my tears as if with 
warm hands could heal 
that which is silent, private and still 
Inside of me.. 

A trinket to a fellow poet for
Inspiring in me the courage
to find the good in my life 
A special dance for the sweet Anne Lise



P.S.  Thank you for always having something encouraging and uplifting to say. God Bless. ~Maddie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:18 PM
This is so sweet, and Anne Lise sure has a very uplifting and positive spirit here!!!!!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 9:20 AM
Excellent write Madelin! Very heartfelt, wonderful (It is said: one compliment can build an Empire....)
Pettit Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 12:53 AM
Anne Lise is a very nice lady on this site. This poetic tribute to her is a fine gesture on your part.
Dahlusion Avatar
February 28, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Beautifully realized, and delivered with masterful diction. Bravo, Poet!
Williams Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 12:06 PM
Madelin as long as you can write like this you will never be forsaken, you have talent keep writing...David
Barton Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:02 AM
thank you for your encouraging words` Maddie
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 7:07 AM
- To cry can do well. . . but a smile makes you feel better :) - A hug to someone who needs it - costs nothing - to dance makes us happy - thanks for the kind words and thanks for always "dancing" with me, Maddie !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 8:18 AM
- Love it, Maddie !!!! <3 <3 <3
Barton Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 8:01 AM
I've read so many of your comments before but "dance a little" stayed with me. I had to write . I know I didn't accomplish what I set out to do here but that line just got stuck in my head and I did the best I could your a great human being Anne Lise It comes across in your writing I bet you inspire many~ Hugs Maddie
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