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Dance Among the Flowers

Flutter into my view beautiful butterfly Dance among the flowers in bloom brighten my summer day with your beauty float on the balmy breeze with whisper of your wings 5-2-2020 Let The Pens Flow - Butterfly Cinquain Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2020 6:39:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2020 9:31:00 PM

big congrats to you, Joseph!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/15/2020 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on your lovely poem, and thanks for taking us to your garden!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/14/2020 10:47:00 PM

So lovely and gentle, Joseph. I want to come to your garden to dance with the butterflies and watch them "float." Congratulations on your winning poem.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/14/2020 6:24:00 PM

Beautiful poem Joseph! I spend each morning watching the seasonal butterflies getting their nectar from the flowers.

Joseph May

Date: 5/14/2020 3:21:00 PM

Thank you all so much for your comments, it is much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2020 1:10:00 PM

your cinquain flutters so remarkably, joseph...big congrats on your award!...huggs

Jenish Somadas

Date: 5/14/2020 9:27:00 AM

float on the balmy breeze.. with whisper of.. your wings.. I love those ending lines.. Congrats on your win Joseph..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/14/2020 5:28:00 AM

This is so poignant and soothing. Congratulations Joseph on your placement :)

Silent One

Date: 5/12/2020 11:30:00 AM

Sounds so lovely... Such serenity would be cherished..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2020 7:59:00 PM

just wonderful and how you did it exactly on the beauty of a butterfly!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/8/2020 10:11:00 AM

Hi Joseph,Butterflies are so delightfully dainty and charming and finally fairy-like. You have captured the essence of what a butterfly is and does. Wonderful Cinquain my friend - I'm sure Jenish will love it! Blessings, Jennifer

Jan Allison

Date: 5/7/2020 11:20:00 AM

such a delightful cinquian Joseph,I adore the image of the butterfly floating on the wind with its whispering wings, how charming:-) hugs jan xx