Constance La France Poet Verse

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Dance

Dips and TURNS are all part
     Delicate footwork too
Dedication a must . . .
        Daily  l o n g  rehearsals
D i z z y  spinning is fun
    Difficult leaping moves
DELIGHTFUL   the applause . . . 

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August 28, 2016

Poetry/Pleisades/Verse/Dance
Copyright Protected, ID 16-824-005-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Pleisades D
sponsor, Kim Merryman 

Fourth Place

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James Inman September 3, 2016 at 10:23 AM Lovely dancing words but its always about the applause (subconscious emotional acceptance, often the sign of a depressed sometimes extremely introverted personality).

Kim Merryman September 1, 2016 at 7:38 PM Constance, I love the way you formatted your poem. Capitalizing some words and spacing out others and the uneven lines gave your work energy, made it dance! Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 4:45 AM - I remember this one, B.W. - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley September 1, 2016 at 12:34 AM Congratulations, Constance, a lovely write. Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2016 at 12:29 AM I adore ballet Constance. Your poem is lovely! Congratulations on your win! ; ) 7

Beautiful Scars August 31, 2016 at 8:00 PM Broken Wings, lovely poem and very delightful...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Augustus Black August 31, 2016 at 8:10 AM Well, this is called a poem. Wow.... Just unique and fabulous. Short but very effective. I like this write. Especially the last line. Can't put aside the picture above. Great write. Take care.

Andrea Dietrich August 29, 2016 at 5:53 PM A delightful entry. These Pleiades were a great idea Kim had. wish I had thought of it!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2016 at 1:43 PM - Lovely written, B.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner August 28, 2016 at 4:32 PM This is really a good one Constance. Good luck!

Joseph May August 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM I like your dance BW...I also chose dance...best wishes

Jan Allison August 28, 2016 at 3:00 PM I thought you would go for this theme as I know you are a keen dancer Constance:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx