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Dance

You take my hand is yours It begins in a elegant ballet It usually turns into a passionate salsa. Then when I go for the lift some you don't catch me and I crash on the floor. You get out of the rhythm and step on my feet. I try to be patient waiting for you to remember our dance. One day I noticed you were not trying and did not want to follow my lead. You gave up on our dance and left me to dance a solo facing the world's music alone. I wait again for another partner so I can again dance a beautiful duet.

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Date: 9/27/2014 1:32:00 AM
touching deeply bless you beautifully crafted
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Kara Fraine
Date: 10/17/2014 1:06:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/23/2014 2:11:00 PM
aww what a sad write - i hope you find another dance partner to take your hand and your heart soon:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Kara Fraine
Date: 9/27/2014 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Jan I hope so to

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