Damocles Sword


Into my death I’d delve before I go, 
Not out of curiosity per se, 
Where, why and how I sure would like to know
To steal a slim chance to cheat my doomsday. 

I’d leave off nasty habits, give or take,
I’d drink 8 cups, eat oatmeal, exercise, 
I’d say bye to booze but for liver’s sake,
I’d go early to bed, early to rise. 

I’d nurture and sustain my mental health,
I’d bury anger issues far aside, 
I’d donate generously of my wealth, 
By virtues’ pristine mandates I’d abide. 

I’d avoid all traffic and derailed trains, 
I’d let the crowded cruises go with ease, 
I’d pass on risky, defective airplanes, 
Goodbye exotic beaches and palm trees. 

I’d much rather live hazard free and gay, 
All healthy in one piece, body and mind, 
I’d laugh in the face of fate if I may - 
But from bland boredom most likely I’d die!

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Date: 3/15/2024 9:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your entry in my contest. Thank you for participating in it. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Got a chuckle at the end.Sara K
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Date: 2/27/2024 6:15:00 PM
Dear Margarita, your poem is a clever exploration of the struggle between living life to the fullest and fearing one's demise. The contrasting desires for both adventure and safety are relatable and humorously presented. The ending line, "But from bland boredom most likely I'd die!" perfectly captures the dilemma. A thought-provoking and witty poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/28/2024 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, made you stop and think :) Right now I’m enjoying the palm trees in Antigua. Good inspiration! You couldn’t have said it better. Thank you!
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