Damdam

In a far mountain area of Leyte Located in the Pearl of Orient Sea A South East Asian country Lies a mysterious tale of Damdam A wine bottled-size creature Enormous critter, surpassing all others This minuscule noshes greedily It embezzles the mortals' ranch produce Tote such back to his family Unexpectedly was seized up by human Captured and imprisoned in a corral hopeless of escaping from their hands To escape, might and power were used But to the mortals pity and kindness Released Damdam from captivity From then on Damdam's mysterious story Repeatedly however secretly narrated Hoping that it's contour one day will be peeked April 27, 2017 By: Precioso L. Tano

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Darren White

Date: 4/27/2017 4:40:00 AM

This Damdam is mysterious :) I love this tale of yours very much. The name intrigued me so I googled it. And apparently there is a tale about a staff Damdam that can protect from evil genii. I like that! And I like your poem.

Precioso Tano
Date: 4/27/2017 5:06:00 AM

When i saw the contest about the mythical creature...i made one poem for it.

Precioso Tano
Date: 4/27/2017 4:56:00 AM

Thanks sir...actually the story about damdam was told by my grandma and i am also narrated it to my own kid.