Miesha Kurt Poet Elegy

Damanation Vs Heaven

Lips all were frozen and nothing,
availed for the people knew it was time
to dwell in the damnation island full of fire
and fear o well they should have listned
to signs my dear they stood there shaking 
and begging god please and he replied
i never knew you so please leave they stepped 
one foot into that firery place and burned in damnation 
all day and for eternity.....

But there was a greater place where everyone
was jolly hopping around on gold bricks paved
clearly on a rode that lead to the king the angels
rejoiced as they so us approach and god gave us a tender
kiss as we came close i knew it was heaven from the beginning 
as well it was my life and i couldnt tell....

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John Freeman October 4, 2009 at 1:21 PM There is a sad fact that many would like to ignore, there must come a cleansing. There is a way that seems right to the mind of man, but the end thereof is death. There is a way that is right, in the heart, thereof is life everlasting. Sincerely, Love, Moses WELCOME TO SOUP!

Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2009 at 5:10 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Miesha. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Nadia Shahwan October 3, 2009 at 7:16 PM Good poetry. All the best.