Dali Makes a Promise

Dali makes a promise He won't kiss Giraffe's brace clock melts bopper A grasshopper He chills makes volte-face

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Constance La France

Date: 2/28/2015 7:41:00 AM

Rajat, very nice, I am terrible at limericks, so admire anyone who can do them and thanks so much for visiting my poem , I write poems . . .

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/2/2015 11:16:00 AM

O Constance my friend.You are versatile. Please write lim. I'll be happy. I die for lim.Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2015 6:15:00 AM

- Thanks .... :)))) - I wish you a lovely weekend, Rajat ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/2/2015 11:16:00 AM

Love AL

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/27/2015 10:27:00 AM

Came for something more to smile about, Rajat. Incongruous! Dali trying not to kiss Giraffe's BRACE! Very imaginative! 7 for me. BTW, would have submitted my first limerick today, system won't allow me. Wonder why...:D Kim

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/2/2015 11:17:00 AM

Love Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/26/2015 11:29:00 AM

Delightful, my friend Rajat!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/2/2015 11:17:00 AM

Love & Regards Demetrios. God bless.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/26/2015 10:57:00 AM

Such fun, a 7 Blessings dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 3/2/2015 11:18:00 AM

My dear Eve. Much much love to you and Sonny. God bless both of you.