Dali Makes a Promise

Dali makes a promise
He won't kiss Giraffe's brace
clock melts bopper
A grasshopper
He chills makes volte-face
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Rajat, very nice, I am terrible at limericks, so admire anyone who can do them and thanks so much for visiting my poem , I write poems . . .
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:16 AM
O Constance my friend.You are versatile. Please write lim. I'll be happy. I die for lim.Love
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:15 AM
- Thanks .... :)))) - I wish you a lovely weekend, Rajat ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:16 AM
Love AL
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February 27, 2015 at 10:27 AM
Came for something more to smile about, Rajat. Incongruous! Dali trying not to kiss Giraffe's BRACE! Very imaginative! 7 for me. BTW, would have submitted my first limerick today, system won't allow me. Wonder why...:D Kim
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Love Kim
Trifiatis Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Delightful, my friend Rajat!
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Love & Regards Demetrios. God bless.
Roper Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Such fun, a 7 Blessings dear friend
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:18 AM
My dear Eve. Much much love to you and Sonny. God bless both of you.
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