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Daisy The Pollen Presenter

Daisy field Blown by the soft breeze yield Downy petals flow malleable Brave pressures of nature designed to be able Created by God very good acceptable Sturdy stems golden scented center The pollen presenter Field enter With a soft kiss sealed The butterfly's touch on Daisy Their hand perfect dealed Short kiss pollen sip love one Flit onward to next Daisy In Daisy field healed Viewing birds adorable Scene feelings affirmable Birds, bees, flowers my good emotions revealed Those emotions that once were locked away thinking concealed Good feelings now able To let all blocked emotions yield Freedom very accomplishable Like a banana skin is unpeeled Life before Daisy field so abominable Glad that life now accountable Emotions pour slowly unconcealable Lessons learned from Daisy field high yield (Very difficult three forms in one write. Thanks Jared for the challenge..I was determined that I was going to write something..)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/29/2010 1:52:00 AM
like the image here Sara thank you duncan
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Date: 10/11/2010 11:57:00 AM
really liked the word pictures, and the sense of someone pushing the envelope
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Date: 10/11/2010 11:19:00 AM
Creative and very visual write Sara ! I think you did a fine job here Sara ! Much love, james
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:34:00 AM
Gorgeous write - hope you are in 'the pink' Sara - Liz
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:40:00 AM
excellent, you've done very well. very creative, enjoyed. Harry
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