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Daisy Darling

She blooms with the breaking dawn's first light with her breath so fresh and her face so bright. She looks flawless with her beauty at its height like a symbol of a new start, hope's next flight. Innocence is her essence, giving us an insight; she is an epitome of purity all dressed in white. Swaying in the cool breeze her figure so lite. She is daisy darling, every gardener's delight. Date : 09/14/2016 Note : Entered in two different contests. (1) Max of 10 lines, contest 201 by Brian Strand - *Placed Third* (2) 8 lines max old or new by Rick Parise - *Placed Second*

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Date: 10/28/2017 10:45:00 AM
Very fresh and summery. Delightful.
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Date: 10/28/2017 11:37:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Line.
Date: 12/25/2016 2:18:00 PM
which contest did this one win. I am happy for you that it won because it is so sweet, Afzal. BIG congrats . Also I found this one by looking at your list of Best poetry. This is your number one poem according to poetrysoup!! I am glad to finally see it.
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Date: 12/25/2016 9:42:00 PM
This won both the contests mentioned. Yes, even I am surprised to see this as no.1 on my best poetry list. I mean, I have my other favorites. Andrea, thank you so much for reading my poems.
Date: 11/1/2016 5:55:00 AM
wonderful!... warm congrats on your high award, afzal!..huggs
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Date: 11/24/2016 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Nette.
Date: 10/31/2016 7:24:00 AM
Simply beautiful Afzal. Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Moon.
Date: 10/31/2016 7:07:00 AM
Very nice write Afzal...Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/31/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 10/30/2016 9:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Afzal. I love daisies. Agnes
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:43:00 PM
I love Daisies too, but my flower is a Red Rose.
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:56:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations, Afzal!
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:53:00 PM
Afzal, a lovely poem. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/30/2016 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Sonia.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:20:00 PM
Afzal, congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem! Janice
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Date: 10/30/2016 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 10/11/2016 2:12:00 AM
This one is very lovely, Afzal:) I see it has won in the contest, so hearty congratulations:):)
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Date: 10/13/2016 5:16:00 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 9/15/2016 9:39:00 PM
awesome win, Afzal. Big congrats to you.
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Date: 9/15/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea.
Date: 9/15/2016 9:52:00 AM
You made the daisies lovelier Afzal!Congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 9/14/2016 11:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem, AFZAL! ... Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 9/15/2016 12:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Francis.
Date: 9/14/2016 1:40:00 PM
Very nice write Afzal ... Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 9/14/2016 12:06:00 PM
Nice monorhyme. Congrats, Afzal.
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Date: 9/14/2016 10:03:00 AM
Beautiful Afzal...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/14/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thank you very much , Laura.
Date: 9/14/2016 9:50:00 AM
what a charming monorhyme many congrats Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jan. Hugs, Afzal :~)
Date: 9/14/2016 9:18:00 AM
Gee, that was quick! Just saw your placement and congrats on your win:)
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/14/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hahah, it was quick even for me. I just posted and here is the instant result. Thanks, Laura, I appreciate your visits very much.
Date: 9/14/2016 9:14:00 AM
A 7 for this absolutely delightful, WINNING poem, Afzal! Janice
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 9/14/2016 9:03:00 AM
Love this one, Azfal! I always enjoy reading a poem where I think it's one thing, but turns out to be another! 7 :)
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:48:00 AM
I am glad you liked it, Laura.

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