Daisy Daisy

Daisy Daisy give me your answer do, said he 
"I can't cuz I got de flu" she sniffled then blew 
Daisy Daisy you know I love you 
she plucked at the petals, then counted, recounted with rue 
Daisy daisy won't you finally, say I do ?
" I'd like to, I want to but, Achew! 
Daisy Daisy whats up with you ? 
I got a cold and I don't know what to do ! 
Hot Toddy Hot lovin'....  he gave her, that night 
then he loved her and kissed her, with all of his might ! 
The next day she knelt on one knee and did ask, 
"oh Pippin oh Pippin won't you marry me"
I can't love I'm sickie, not now love, Tee Hee.
In the meantime, the ring was attached to a daisy,  
of course he'd marry her, she drove him half crazy !!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fisher Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Creative and fun. I'm sure they figured it out after some hot coughie!
Rolland Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 6:29 PM
charming poetry, really enjoyed your daisy story have a sweet week end
Situation Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Smartly writen.
Cantu Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Cute! Nice play on an old song. Brings to mind the scene in You’ve Got Mail, when Meg Ryan has the flu and Tom Hanks brims her a bouquet of daisies. (It’s one of my favorite movies.) Your poem made me smile.
Brotherton Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Never a doubt in my mind. You know how it goes, through sickness and in health.
DiMino Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Lol:) Love it! Delightful!
Merryman Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:41 AM
A delightful write, Vie! I enjoyed it! Blessings, Kim M
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