Daisy Chain

he loves me....
he loves me not
it's weird how this
feeling hit with
               one fail shot
                              now twisting in your arms
                                                                 arms yearning for freedom
                                                                                         
              but now that im
                                                                                         
                out in the cold
                                                                                         
           you control my being
you say
you love me
i'll believe it 
when i see it
              running into your arms now
                                                  i almost think i'm dreaming
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 23, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Blimey, i can remember doing daisy chains when i was younger. Brings back memories >> James
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