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Daisies and Violets

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I washed your face so gently; Combed your hair the way you wanted it, arranged your hair there on the grass... Followed the stare of your eyes to the sky with that merciless sun. Your small arms and legs; I knew them so well. A soft cotton blanket with daisies as white as your small face, sprinkled the grass, growing midst purple violets, with soft yellow loving hearts, just as once your heart was, exactly the same. *** April 19, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 12:55:00 PM

brilliant darren brilliant!!!I am so lucky to have discovered you.you are a rare talent.

Darren White
Date: 4/21/2017 12:59:00 PM

Thank you for this huge compliment, you honour me :)

Claudia Polydoro

Date: 4/19/2017 7:57:00 PM

So so so beautiful my sweet friend! I loved this one very much <3

Darren White
Date: 4/20/2017 12:54:00 AM

Thanks sweetie :) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/19/2017 5:53:00 PM

A lovely endearing memory you have shared in this tender poem Darren. Beautiful! 7 ; )

Darren White
Date: 4/20/2017 12:53:00 AM

It is a very dear memory indeed, thank you so much Connie :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2017 4:07:00 PM

Oh so beautiful and tender Darren I pictured and older brother looking after his little sister:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Darren White
Date: 4/20/2017 12:52:00 AM

Thanks Jan, also for the 7 :) I like the image it brings you, keep that!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/19/2017 3:15:00 PM

Sweet and gentle pen my friend :) xomo

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 3:26:00 PM

Yeah mo. I love this poem a little :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/19/2017 3:10:00 PM

Sigh...So beautiful..I am moved.A fave

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 3:24:00 PM

Ow Charma, thank you soooo much <3

Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2017 11:58:00 AM

Very tender my friend

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Tim, it was a very tender moment in my memory.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/19/2017 11:30:00 AM

So lovely, Darren! So tender! 7

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim, also for the 7 :)

White Wolf

Date: 4/19/2017 11:29:00 AM

I wouldn't even know the difference between daisies and violets, my knowledge of flora is nil. But I could read your poetry all night long ~~~/|\~~~

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 11:32:00 AM

But I love it that you can read my poetry all night long :)

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 11:31:00 AM

Pfft, for someone with your interests, you should, so start studying Budgie :)

Chris Green

Date: 4/19/2017 11:27:00 AM

This was beautiful my friend. If words could bloom, they just have right in front of my eyes. A very tender and endearing poem.

Darren White
Date: 4/19/2017 11:31:00 AM

Thank you. It is a special memory for me.