Daisies

the fence
sways open
onto meadows
lucky daisies
dance carefree
though the gate
freedom awaits



AP: 3rd place 2020

Posted on January 23, 2019

flowerfreedomhappyupliftingfree verse

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W.A. Cholt

Date: 1/25/2019 2:20:00 PM

Lovely poem. Amazing how the simplicity and beauty of nature never fails to capture our attention. Best wishes to you and yours for 2019.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/25/2019 3:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, WA. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/24/2019 3:24:00 PM

I cant wait until they come back. I felt good after reading this one, like someone handed me a daisy

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/24/2019 8:51:00 PM

That is absolutely wonderful, Timothy.

David Byrne

Date: 1/24/2019 12:18:00 AM

I know the feeling.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/24/2019 9:06:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, David.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/23/2019 7:56:00 PM

Economy of verse -- maximizing imagery and penetrating message. Excellent poesy, methinks. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 11:41:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated, visit and comment, Gershon.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/23/2019 5:47:00 PM

They truly are, as penned here.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 7:15:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2019 3:35:00 PM

a beautiful little picture you created with this one, line. Well, look at this, I got caught up and can hurry home to hubbie!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 7:16:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/23/2019 12:27:00 PM

I cannot help but think you were standing at a farm fence looking in, and feeling sorry for them.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 1:06:00 PM

LOL Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

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