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Daiper Footles

Dad thinks
Kid stinks

Gets up
Sniffs butt ….

Oh phew!
Big pooh

Crappy
Nappy

Change me
Quickly

Clean flesh
Smells fresh

15th September 2014

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James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2014 4:30:00 PM

Oh my!! this little collection escaped me Jan, love them, James :) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2014 4:33:00 PM

Lol James you know me - I could write them forever such a clever form:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2014 10:05:00 AM

enjoyed the humor, Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 10:37:00 AM

Thanks Dr Mehta i try and write with humour whenever possible:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2014 11:01:00 PM

I love Lyric Man's response here. I second it!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 12:34:00 AM

Guess I'm now Queen of poop .. or maybe I simply just write it LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 9/15/2014 7:35:00 PM

Pooh pooh, ugh. Glad I don't have kids lol. Why do you have to sniff it haha?

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 12:32:00 AM

just checking it wasn't really the hubby or dog farting - oops we don't have a dog lol Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/15/2014 7:31:00 PM

Oh yeah it finally came to me. Great footle, very funny. I loved it. Have your people call my people and we'll do lunch.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 12:30:00 AM

I would if I could Maurice - would be so fun to meet you guys:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/15/2014 7:29:00 PM

oops i talked so much about me i forgot to...you know...something.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 12:29:00 AM

you forgot to what... lol Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/15/2014 7:28:00 PM

i raised two girls by myself from the age of 4 and 1. after a while it becomes second nature. i have had hay fever since youth luckily i have hardly any sense of smell. makes it easier. nurses learn how to breathe through their mouths.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2014 12:28:00 AM

LOL Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx