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Crowded beats, Hurried feat On city street Buzzing, upbeat, Meet, greet, Unrelenting Daily routine. July 8, 2021 Picture This 2 – 7 Lines Poetry Sponsor: Joseph May Image # 2

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Date: 3/29/2022 5:21:00 AM
Crisp and pithy.... ! The hustle and bustle of city life ! Is 'feat' a typo here? In short lines, you have fitted in the entire humdrum.....
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:49:00 PM
I can't find a new poem to comment to, but I can at least say congrats for your win with this poem!
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Date: 7/18/2021 4:10:00 PM
Excellent interpretation of the image, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2021 6:03:00 AM
I enjoyed the hustle and bustle as I do when I visit NYC!
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Date: 7/16/2021 11:32:00 PM
The poem's theme, the picture, and finally the winning prize, a perfect match, dear poet
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Date: 7/14/2021 11:31:00 PM
Wow excellent winner here. Love it, Vijay.
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Date: 7/14/2021 1:10:00 PM
- Back with a big congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:02:00 AM
Daily routine in a busy city buzzing with life well penned and well captured Vijayji... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/14/2021 8:48:00 AM
Sometimes routine is what keeps us alive and kicking, other times its nice to step on the grass bare feet, when an unexpected day comes along. Nicely penned Vijay, :)
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Date: 7/14/2021 6:47:00 AM
Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/13/2021 9:37:00 AM
Well done, Vijay. CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:31:00 PM
Beautiful Work. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.
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Date: 7/11/2021 8:04:00 PM
Seems this is the "Daily routine" for those that live in the big city. You have expressed this so well, with just a few words. A simple country girl like me, will stay in the calm that holds the day. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/12/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thank you my friend-- much appreciate. Stay in the calm!
Date: 7/11/2021 12:11:00 AM
Vijay, Absoletely nothing routine in such a fine poet's day. -Richard
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:43:00 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Date: 7/10/2021 6:09:00 AM
You have captured perfectly the unrelenting nature of city life....
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:43:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Delice.
Date: 7/9/2021 3:31:00 PM
very well done with that picture, Vijay. It's fun to see which pictures poets choose.
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Date: 7/11/2021 4:43:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 7/9/2021 8:52:00 AM
Love this Vijay, I am a city boy and you have perfectly captured the essence of city live for me! I'm sure this will do well! Happy Friday!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:27:00 PM
Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Mike. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 7/9/2021 5:12:00 AM
Living in the city is not my cup of tea however, I have spent the vast majority of my life living in one. I adore the countryside. You have masterfully compared the two photos, my friend, Vijay! Blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:26:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate.
Date: 7/9/2021 5:09:00 AM
You captured the city well in your verse Vijay, left the city nearly 30 years ago for a country town. I cant say I miss it. Best of luck in the contest Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Tom. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 7/8/2021 5:10:00 PM
I am not a fan of the city. I love the country roads where I live. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:24:00 PM
Much appreciate, Gina. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 7/8/2021 2:13:00 PM
I try to get away form the city every chance I get, all that traffic doesn't help the soul, :) thanks for the poem Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thank you for visiting--much appreciate, Vienna.
Date: 7/8/2021 2:08:00 PM
- I could never live in a city, Vijay ... too much noise and pollution ... well done, with this picture :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:23:00 PM
You are right, but it has its pluses. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Date: 7/8/2021 12:14:00 PM
The unrelenting rhythm of life in the city perfectly expressed Vijay. Bold images tell your story and move us along the sidewalks and city streets! Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 7/9/2021 2:21:00 PM
Glad you could visit with your lovely feedback. Much appreciate, Sam--many thanks.
Date: 7/8/2021 12:08:00 PM
You did well with this Vijay. A good entry :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/9/2021 2:20:00 PM
Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
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