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Daily Routine

Crowded beats,
Hurried feat
On city street

Buzzing, upbeat,
Meet, greet,
Unrelenting
Daily routine.

July 8, 2021
Picture This 2 – 7 Lines Poetry
Sponsor: Joseph May
Image # 2

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Valsa George

March 29, 2022 at 5:21 AM

Crisp and pithy.... ! The hustle and bustle of city life ! Is 'feat' a typo here? In short lines, you have fitted in the entire humdrum.....

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2021 at 5:49 PM

I can't find a new poem to comment to, but I can at least say congrats for your win with this poem!

Jan Allison

July 18, 2021 at 4:10 PM

Excellent interpretation of the image, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

July 18, 2021 at 6:03 AM

I enjoyed the hustle and bustle as I do when I visit NYC!

Aniruddha Pathak

July 16, 2021 at 11:32 PM

The poem's theme, the picture, and finally the winning prize, a perfect match, dear poet

Harry Horsman

July 14, 2021 at 11:31 PM

Wow excellent winner here. Love it, Vijay.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 14, 2021 at 1:10 PM

- Back with a big congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anitha Jayasankar

July 14, 2021 at 10:02 AM

Daily routine in a busy city buzzing with life well penned and well captured Vijayji... God bless... ~ Ani

Mystic Rose Rose

July 14, 2021 at 8:48 AM

Sometimes routine is what keeps us alive and kicking, other times its nice to step on the grass bare feet, when an unexpected day comes along. Nicely penned Vijay, :)

Joseph May

July 14, 2021 at 6:47 AM

Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win

Janice Canerdy

July 13, 2021 at 9:37 AM

Well done, Vijay. CONGRATS. Janice

Christuraj Alex

July 12, 2021 at 7:31 PM

Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

July 12, 2021 at 4:49 PM

Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.

Brandy Nicole

July 11, 2021 at 8:04 PM

Seems this is the "Daily routine" for those that live in the big city. You have expressed this so well, with just a few words. A simple country girl like me, will stay in the calm that holds the day. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit

July 12, 2021 at 6:25 AM

Thank you my friend-- much appreciate. Stay in the calm!

Quoth Theraven

July 11, 2021 at 12:11 AM

Vijay, Absoletely nothing routine in such a fine poet's day. -Richard

Vijay Pandit

July 11, 2021 at 4:43 AM

Thank you Richard--much appreciate.

Delice Arleen Skelly

July 10, 2021 at 6:09 AM

You have captured perfectly the unrelenting nature of city life....

Vijay Pandit

July 11, 2021 at 4:43 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks, Delice.

Andrea Dietrich

July 9, 2021 at 3:31 PM

very well done with that picture, Vijay. It's fun to see which pictures poets choose.

Vijay Pandit

July 11, 2021 at 4:43 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Mike Gentile

July 9, 2021 at 8:52 AM

Love this Vijay, I am a city boy and you have perfectly captured the essence of city live for me! I'm sure this will do well! Happy Friday!

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:27 PM

Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Mike. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 9, 2021 at 5:12 AM

Living in the city is not my cup of tea however, I have spent the vast majority of my life living in one. I adore the countryside. You have masterfully compared the two photos, my friend, Vijay! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:26 PM

Thank you my friend. Always a joy to read your feedback. Much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

July 9, 2021 at 5:09 AM

You captured the city well in your verse Vijay, left the city nearly 30 years ago for a country town. I cant say I miss it. Best of luck in the contest Tom

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:25 PM

Thank you Tom. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Regina Mcintosh

July 8, 2021 at 5:10 PM

I am not a fan of the city. I love the country roads where I live. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:24 PM

Much appreciate, Gina. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

July 8, 2021 at 2:13 PM

I try to get away form the city every chance I get, all that traffic doesn't help the soul, :) thanks for the poem Vijay

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:23 PM

Thank you for visiting--much appreciate, Vienna.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 8, 2021 at 2:08 PM

- I could never live in a city, Vijay ... too much noise and pollution ... well done, with this picture :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:23 PM

You are right, but it has its pluses. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Sam Kauffman

July 8, 2021 at 12:14 PM

The unrelenting rhythm of life in the city perfectly expressed Vijay. Bold images tell your story and move us along the sidewalks and city streets! Best wishes for the contest.

Vijay Pandit

July 9, 2021 at 2:21 PM

Glad you could visit with your lovely feedback. Much appreciate, Sam--many thanks.