James Marshall Goff Poet Free verse

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sweet compassion
surrounds
my
heart of uncertainty

patiently flavoring
my
vision of life

sorting
fiction from truth

trusting
everyday Angels
leading
me forward
across
parched deserts
of
discovery

believing
believing

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Frank F. Atanacio March 23, 2009 at 9:41 AM wow had to put this one in my fav--well written well penned

Charmaine Chircop March 20, 2009 at 11:57 PM sorting fiction from truth,a hard work to do in this life,very true what you wrote so well here-charmaine

Belinda Parish March 20, 2009 at 10:54 PM Absolutely wonderful write James, especially the line 'trusting everyday Angels'...

Carolyn Devonshire March 20, 2009 at 8:41 AM Indeed, you are a man of great compassion, someone I would like to have as a friend. Your poetry speaks to me in a gentle, loving voice, James. LOVE this work!

Christopher Higgins March 20, 2009 at 5:19 AM Thank you James for the comments.

Laurie Ginn March 20, 2009 at 4:36 AM parched deserts, does that ever say so much, great writing James

Sharon Winter March 19, 2009 at 12:26 PM Beautiful, comforting write. Don't think I would be here if it weren't for those every day angels. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 19, 2009 at 8:18 AM Dear Jim, YOU have to LOVE those Angels that lead YOU to believing I so LOVE the style YOU write in THIS POEM is a Majestically Awesome Write Spiritual Write...HG

L'Nass Shango March 18, 2009 at 8:22 AM This poem ranks you with all post modernity, Sir. You have a path to blaze, blaze on!

John Loving Iii March 17, 2009 at 3:44 PM there it is over the next dune. let us sing, sing the next tune. it's true it's true it's true. john

Lena Townsend March 17, 2009 at 7:56 AM Undying faith is portrayed here. This is wonderful, so full of hope and inspiring others to believe that all things are possible in faith. Great writing! Have a great day. Smiles from Lolita

Carrie Richards March 17, 2009 at 7:19 AM Hopeful, trusting and uplifting....this has a feel of sacred beauty about it....just lovely! Good expression and nice beginning of the day. ~ Carrie

Constance La France March 17, 2009 at 7:06 AM Jim, thanks for your comments on my poems, I truly appreciate...I write alot of my life experiences and memories.. it is my way... now your poem here is absolutely beautiful in its flow, and depth of the words.. I just loved it..... Constance

Christopher Higgins March 17, 2009 at 7:00 AM Parched deserts are wonderful to read.. love those angels that keeps us safe.. good write.

Frank F. Atanacio March 17, 2009 at 5:54 AM I love the way this just flowed wonderfully:_

Arany P. March 17, 2009 at 5:48 AM wonderful thought, Jim! loved how it all flowed so gently! ~ Arany