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The sun's rays blast through my bedroom window Filling the room with daily inspiration To help me brave the new day that's ahead Knowing obstacles that await are unknown I will hold my head high and march onward Making sure to learn all the day's life lessons So I'll be a better man tomorrow I'll learn how to be truly selfless and just For God is the only one that can judge A world occupied with shame and happiness Being ripped apart from the outside I pray I have the time to repent my sins Before the day of wrecking has arrived Provoked by our own mistreatment and hatred For everyone and all things around us I'm tired and getting older by the second My life's days steadily fading away God, please forgive my belated commitment All my trust I forever give to you Undeserving I beg for your endless love I will take full ownership of my shame In hopes, you'll embrace me with your love and warmth When my end finally takes me away 6/14/2017

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Date: 6/26/2017 2:01:00 AM
Nice achievement being top 100 best new poems. I'm proud of you and you deserve it. You put in the work. So the work is put back into you; poetry induced strength—overcoming fatigue. That's yours and you freely share it with the world.
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/26/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, kindly for your view and comment!! It is nice to have our work up there on that board!!
Date: 6/21/2017 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations Jeremy. ! :)
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/21/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi :) Same to you as well!!
Date: 6/20/2017 7:00:00 PM
Congrats!!!Jeremy...on your fine win my friend...very inspirational...god bless...^WW^
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/20/2017 7:04:00 PM
Thank you, Winged Warrior :) Great win on your end!! And God bless you as well!!
Date: 6/20/2017 5:51:00 PM
May the sun's rays inspire many more great writes from your pen, Jeremy! Top win my friend
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/20/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thanks so much :) I was unsure of this entry too lol!
Date: 6/14/2017 9:13:00 PM
A prayer inspired by sunshine makes us all see the light...
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Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/14/2017 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :) for the view and comment! Take care and God bless!!

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