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Birds roost; the sun sets, The day ends and sleeps, The moon up high, It lights the sky; stars peep.
Written By Mandy Tams Entry for David Williams Twenty/Twenty Used 20 words and 20 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:05 PM
i'm here again, i've just remembered, i just could not do this contest at all, i really like this...
K Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 12:12 PM
Wonderful job, Mandy! Congrats on your win
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:34 AM
Congrats Golden Girl! A lovely description of nightfall. Blessings, Rhonda
K. Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:44 AM
This made me smile and reminded me to appreciate what we could see daily, Mandy! Super congrats on your win :D
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:49 AM
thanks nikko somtimes we take things for granted and it helps just slow us a bit to appreciate what we have xx
Taylor Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 7:34 AM
Congrats, Mandy. Excellent well deserved win. Thanks for your comments. hugs, Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Ralph much appreciated xxooxx
A   Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:49 PM
MANDY... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Great flow to this winning work..Congrats..Sara
Horsman Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:40 PM
congrats Mandy, wonderful winner. harry
Ronthorpe Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Mandy, such a great use of 20 words. Your talent is inspiring, wonderful work. Congrats on winning David's contest.....................S.Ronthorpe
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 10:55 AM
and so the world turns aye? Congrad's Light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:46 AM
super cheers to you for the grand win,mandy!.:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 9:13 AM
wonderfully creative Mandy.. major congrats on a winning wonder and first place too luv..
Bauer Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 7:52 AM
congrats on a well-deserved win!
Poet Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:22 AM
Beautiful imagery here Mandy.Congrats on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Thanks Kash xx
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in David William's "Twenty/Twenty" contest Mandy. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:46 PM
I think you did GREAT with your 20 words. How will he ever judge this contest???
Susan Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 5:42 PM
cute picture - are you allowed to use punctuation? it would help the flow. also, roost? I really like how the stars peep, like the birds in the beginning. very clever :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 12:32 PM
a knock-out, mandy... grrreat job!..:) winning huggs!
Mister Roboto Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 12:56 AM
U Nailed it Mandy Tams!
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:59 PM
Adorable!! I need to post mine soon too!!!
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Enjoyed this Mandy , best of luck in the contest , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
Poet Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Very good write Mandy.Best wishes.
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