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Dahlia In a Whirl

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2 Quote A Flower Daily - Yellow Dahlia Abstract

She flows, flows while petals spread their vibrant blooms On April's mural , those lips dare to tease... Her contours trailing with velour costumes Wildly ablaze, to ride on spring’s trapeze. This ambrosial drift which shines ,which glows From heaven’s mold granting dahlia's trance Enchanting a whirl, my shade of yellows... Like me, she curls into a floral dance! Flower Contest:Brian Strand

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/27/2019 7:52:00 PM

Gorgeous! My imagination was swept up in a twirl with your ‘dahlia in a whirl’, Nette. Delicate beauty sways effortlessly through your vibrant verse. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2019 6:48:00 AM

Beautiful poem..Congrats Nette on a podium win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2019 4:46:00 AM

A very deserving podium when Nettie. I remember this lovely poem. Congratulations! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/24/2019 11:00:00 PM

Beautiful, nette. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.

John Lawless

Date: 8/17/2016 9:08:00 AM

congrats on the top spot Nette

Lu Loo

Date: 8/15/2016 4:08:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your top win! It is well deserved lady :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/15/2016 8:34:00 AM

Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/15/2016 3:38:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your awesome win:)

Tom Arnone

Date: 8/14/2016 2:45:00 PM

That is so expertly written. Too many favorite lines to choose from. Congrats on your number one win! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/14/2016 11:38:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place...enjoyed the read. :) Sunita

Joseph May

Date: 8/14/2016 7:27:00 AM

"to ride on spring's trapeze....Beautiful write Nette....Congrats on your win

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/13/2016 9:24:00 PM

Nette, I am so happy to see this did take top honors! Back to congratulate you my friend. Beautiful! 7 ; )

John Hamilton

Date: 8/13/2016 9:22:00 PM

Just wonderful Nette, congrats on your first place win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2016 9:09:00 PM

Wow! Wow! Nette, this is beautifully written the imagery and flow is fantastic. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

CayCay Jennings

Date: 8/13/2016 8:57:00 PM

Oh, sweet, sweet Nette, sweet, sweet poem. I still feel twirly and swirly and intoxicated from dancing in it. Just beautiful. I must (must) fav it ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 8/13/2016 8:35:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/13/2016 8:28:00 PM

Hi Nette, take a bow on your top win. Congratulations it was well deserved: -) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/12/2016 1:02:00 AM

Simply stunning:) I can see your dahlias:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/9/2016 9:06:00 PM

They are the most glorious of flowers, and your poems are also prized beauties !! Lovely poem, Nette !!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2016 3:41:00 AM

Oh how lovely tbis is Nette. Truly inspired. I hope this takes top honors. 7 ; )

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/7/2016 3:26:00 PM

Now I need to listen to some Tom Jones. I haven't heard the name in years. enjoyed your poem.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/7/2016 11:59:00 AM

I feel like smelling a dahlia now lol...great verse nette...words well written...god bless...^WW^

Carly Lalion

Date: 8/7/2016 8:14:00 AM

Your flawless poem brings freshness, a promise that is very endearing to read. I like the way it's structured it, ending it with a dance!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/6/2016 11:47:00 PM

To see the beauty in a flower or a woman, is to see the beauty of life itself! Beautiful!

Franco Gonza

Date: 8/6/2016 6:06:00 PM

You chose an exotic flower which beguiles, just like you! Brilliant poem!