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Daft-- Couch Potato

Dear Lordy, what have you done
this loony spouse given me…
he rants and TV- clicks all night
much like a  freakish banshee!

Obsessed with horror movies
remote  control is life's drug:
This model needs rebooting,
It's time for urgent de-bug.



11/11/2017
Written for Kevin Shaw's Surreal and Daft

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2017

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/14/2017 10:58:00 PM VERY nicely done, Nette. This contest is still going on? Can't wait to see all the winners and I appreciate my win in your last contest. I used to have a collection of mama, papa and baby couch potatoes but I've lost the baby and the clothing that was on the mama and papa. I love couch potatoes, even my live one!!! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/11/2017 4:21:00 AM Ha! The humor within this delightful write is quite incredible my friend, I surely love reading this tremendously well written poem with gleeful positions of humor and wonderment! You have written such a magnificent and remarkable piece, that which is truly worthy of a first place vote! Oh, I really like the extra spaces you place within your poem to add for effect...I certainly noticed that! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/10/2017 3:16:00 PM :))) ... well done, Nette :))) .... love it :))) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/10/2017 1:20:00 PM The picture says it all--fun read--best for a win, nette! Login to Reply

DM Babbit Date: 11/10/2017 1:10:00 PM Know exactly what you are saying but... I think it's me too, skip the horror, the CISs and give me LOL comedy. Login to Reply

Lyva Marty Date: 11/10/2017 1:01:00 PM Lol, fun-tastic write. That widescreen is the main altar of modern life. I like the visual, too! Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 11/10/2017 12:47:00 PM Oh my Nette! Thanks for the laugh with this one :) Login to Reply