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Daft-- Couch Potato

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Dear Lordy, what have you done this loony spouse given me… he rants and TV- clicks all night much like a freakish banshee! Obsessed with horror movies remote control is life's drug: This model needs rebooting, It's time for urgent de-bug. 11/11/2017 Written for Kevin Shaw's Surreal and Daft

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/14/2017 10:58:00 PM
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VERY nicely done, Nette. This contest is still going on? Can't wait to see all the winners and I appreciate my win in your last contest. I used to have a collection of mama, papa and baby couch potatoes but I've lost the baby and the clothing that was on the mama and papa. I love couch potatoes, even my live one!!!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 11/11/2017 4:21:00 AM
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Ha! The humor within this delightful write is quite incredible my friend, I surely love reading this tremendously well written poem with gleeful positions of humor and wonderment! You have written such a magnificent and remarkable piece, that which is truly worthy of a first place vote! Oh, I really like the extra spaces you place within your poem to add for effect...I certainly noticed that! Great Work!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2017 3:16:00 PM
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:))) ... well done, Nette :))) .... love it :))) - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/10/2017 1:20:00 PM
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The picture says it all--fun read--best for a win, nette!
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Dm Babbit
Date: 11/10/2017 1:10:00 PM
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Know exactly what you are saying but... I think it's me too, skip the horror, the CISs and give me LOL comedy.
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Lyva Marty
Date: 11/10/2017 1:01:00 PM
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Lol, fun-tastic write. That widescreen is the main altar of modern life. I like the visual, too!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/10/2017 12:47:00 PM
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Oh my Nette! Thanks for the laugh with this one :)
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