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Daffodils a Drift

Snow drifts buoyant on the breeze downy like a dandelion seed touching the cheek of dawn delicately... Endless crystalline patterns of white grace each hollow, cleft and limb formed in rose pink light.. Upon cold surfaces of glass or stone, snow glances Up on the warmer growths of somnambulant grass it clings a fusion of facets, a light Spring feeding for rising daffodils each jade green spear engulfed in a pocket of white...

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/2/2012 11:44:00 AM

some kind of wonderful , debbie.. round of cheers to you for the grreat win; lovely nature song!.. thanks for enjoying my razzmatazz dash!..: huggs!

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/2/2012 11:07:00 AM

Your choice of words and imagery is excellent. Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2012 6:49:00 PM

Great piece and fantastic win. Our fields of daffodils Are in full color right now. We will be having a tulip tour all through the week of April but they are not showing much color as yet. The tourists are here looking for them. I live in the midst of the bulb fields. Love, Joyce

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/1/2012 4:07:00 PM

Nice piece,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win.....Love olusegun

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/1/2012 3:22:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie!! on your win...lovely write! Well Done...huggsss,love deb

Jon Arno

Date: 4/1/2012 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie...Beautiful write...Love, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 6:47:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2012 1:55:00 PM

Awesome imagery, Deb. What a terrific poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2012 10:15:00 AM

congrats Debbier on a fab win for lovely poetry on exquisite flower of Spring luv..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/6/2012 6:01:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie very nice. Did you take the photo? xx

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/6/2012 6:37:00 AM

no Mandy I believe it was one from Fliker where anyone can post their photos on line

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2012 1:18:00 AM

i like the embroidered pattern here, debbie... happy congrats on your stunning win!...huggs

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/6/2012 12:14:00 AM

congrats on your 8th place win Debbie, great imagery

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/1/2012 6:55:00 PM

Love your poem, and the pictures are wonderful. You are so clever!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2012 10:48:00 PM

the last line really goes well with that picture, Deb. Do you think the pictures show up for the judges? Or only here? Good luck in that contest.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/1/2012 5:15:00 AM

don't know Andie BUT my writes are meant to stand alone without the picturee I get the picturee frrom the write not the othee way around

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/29/2012 4:42:00 AM

Beautiful photo and beautiful poem Debbie, a pleasure to read it.Have a lovely day! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2012 6:16:00 PM

pssst.... not date and too long, please check contest page

Shirley Long

Date: 2/28/2012 12:19:00 PM

Very nice poem, I enjoyed reading about the snow drips, also your verses a light spring feeding for rising daffodils sparkles one's imagination and that picture just makes it more visible and pleasant to look at.