Jimmy Anderson Poet Haiku

Daffodils

many daffodils
beautiful on windowsills
narcissus appeals

one yellow divine
single or double refine
purist flower mine

dainty and sublime
standing hours at a time
waving in their prime

*For Carol Browns "What's The Buzz" Haiku contest

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Kash Poet March 11, 2011 at 8:38 AM Congrats Jimmy on your well deserved win!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick March 10, 2011 at 4:03 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George March 10, 2011 at 1:01 PM Another wonderful Haiku sequence, Jimmy. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Audrey Haick March 10, 2011 at 12:01 PM Congratulations on your deserving 4th Place win in Carol's contest, JAM. Annalise

John Freeman March 10, 2011 at 10:35 AM Such a pleasure to see you Jimmy near the top with this worthy fourth place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire March 10, 2011 at 9:35 AM Very descriptive, Jimmy. Perhaps you were describing a special lady as well as the lovely flowers. Congratulations on your win! Love, "sis"

Carol Sunshine Brown March 10, 2011 at 6:26 AM Congratulations on the win in my contest Jimmy. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Ray Dillard March 9, 2011 at 6:34 PM Nicely captured spring flowers! Every line! RAY

Joyce Johnson March 9, 2011 at 4:19 PM Very nice salute to the daffodil. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2011 at 2:36 PM Congrats Jimmy on your super cool win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win...

Dr.Ram Mehta March 9, 2011 at 2:27 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Carol, Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2011 at 2:11 PM Congratulations, JImmy, Glad to see this one again!

Debbie Guzzi March 3, 2011 at 12:28 PM sweet thoughts thanks for the visit! Light & Love

Shay Funk March 3, 2011 at 10:57 AM Love, love, love it! Good luck, this deserves to win!

George Aul March 2, 2011 at 12:36 PM Good luck in Carol's contest......George

Marymkilker Marymkilker March 2, 2011 at 11:08 AM Sweet poem and pleasent to read.

Daver Austin March 2, 2011 at 7:30 AM Colorful and sensitive. Luck in the contest. daver

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2011 at 11:54 PM Cute, just like those daffodils.

Dr.Ram Mehta March 1, 2011 at 4:57 PM beautiful string of haiku with continuity of the theme, Jimmy

Audrey Haick March 1, 2011 at 1:22 PM Sweet and serene, giving the perfect feel of spring, JAM. Looks like a winner to me. Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 1, 2011 at 12:19 PM Wonderful Haikus Jimmy to describe Mother Nature in full bloom luv.. good luck in the contest..

Deb Wilson March 1, 2011 at 11:45 AM just beautiful..best of luck in Carol's contest Jimmy! love ,Deb