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Daffodils

many daffodils beautiful on windowsills narcissus appeals one yellow divine single or double refine purist flower mine dainty and sublime standing hours at a time waving in their prime *For Carol Browns "What's The Buzz" Haiku contest

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Date: 3/11/2011 8:38:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your well deserved win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:01:00 PM
Another wonderful Haiku sequence, Jimmy. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving 4th Place win in Carol's contest, JAM. Annalise
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:35:00 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Jimmy near the top with this worthy fourth place beauty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:35:00 AM
Very descriptive, Jimmy. Perhaps you were describing a special lady as well as the lovely flowers. Congratulations on your win! Love, "sis"
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Jimmy. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:34:00 PM
Nicely captured spring flowers! Every line! RAY
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:19:00 PM
Very nice salute to the daffodil. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:36:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your super cool win in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win...
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Carol, Jimmy
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations, JImmy, Glad to see this one again!
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:28:00 PM
sweet thoughts thanks for the visit! Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:57:00 AM
Love, love, love it! Good luck, this deserves to win!
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Date: 3/2/2011 12:36:00 PM
Good luck in Carol's contest......George
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:08:00 AM
Sweet poem and pleasent to read.
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Date: 3/2/2011 7:30:00 AM
Colorful and sensitive. Luck in the contest. daver
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:54:00 PM
Cute, just like those daffodils.
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Date: 3/1/2011 4:57:00 PM
beautiful string of haiku with continuity of the theme, Jimmy
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:22:00 PM
Sweet and serene, giving the perfect feel of spring, JAM. Looks like a winner to me. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/1/2011 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful Haikus Jimmy to describe Mother Nature in full bloom luv.. good luck in the contest..
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:45:00 AM
just beautiful..best of luck in Carol's contest Jimmy! love ,Deb
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