Daffodils

Missing you, the grey sky matches my mood - head down, I pass daffodils and brighten at the sight... written 22nd March for Constance's kimo contest

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Date: 4/2/2019 6:02:00 AM

Very lovely Jack! Congratulations on your win with this little gem! : ) xxoo

Date: 3/26/2019 12:47:00 AM

Lovely kimo, jack. Big congrats on your win.

Date: 3/25/2019 3:02:00 PM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest. I love daffodils too, how can we be sad when we see them in Spring ~

Date: 3/24/2019 2:00:00 PM

Great little gem....Congrat... I would have placed this higher. BG

Date: 3/24/2019 8:17:00 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 3/22/2019 6:43:00 PM

Daffodils can have an uplifting effect. Thanks for all the visits to my pages. Sara

Date: 3/22/2019 4:59:00 PM

I just love the imagery in your finely written Kimo, Jack! Best of luck in the contest! :)

Date: 3/22/2019 3:38:00 PM

Contrasting moods ably tackled, Jack. No wonder Wordsworth's heart with pleasure filled and danced with the daffodils. Regards // paul

Date: 3/22/2019 3:27:00 PM

- Daffodils are like sunshine ... you just have to smile, Jack :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)