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Daffodils

Missing you, the grey sky matches my mood - 
head down, I pass daffodils
and brighten at the sight...

written 22nd March for Constance's kimo contest

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

April 2, 2019 at 6:02 AM

Very lovely Jack! Congratulations on your win with this little gem! : ) xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2019 at 12:47 AM

Lovely kimo, jack. Big congrats on your win.

Constance La France

March 25, 2019 at 3:02 PM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest. I love daffodils too, how can we be sad when we see them in Spring ~

Barbara Gorelick

March 24, 2019 at 2:00 PM

Great little gem....Congrat... I would have placed this higher. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2019 at 8:17 AM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

March 22, 2019 at 6:43 PM

Daffodils can have an uplifting effect. Thanks for all the visits to my pages. Sara

March 22, 2019 at 4:59 PM

I just love the imagery in your finely written Kimo, Jack! Best of luck in the contest! :)

March 22, 2019 at 3:38 PM

Contrasting moods ably tackled, Jack. No wonder Wordsworth's heart with pleasure filled and danced with the daffodils. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 22, 2019 at 3:27 PM

- Daffodils are like sunshine ... you just have to smile, Jack :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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