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Daffodil Dreams

Burgundy breaths beside blue brook Floating in air nearby blonde ambition natural ammunition Butterfly wings dipping sipping Daffodils dreams of yellow and cream Nectar refreshing little tongue Soaking drinking glowing from gold sun Tummy full and finally free To catch a nap in greenery Heaven is a bed floating flower head Hidden from birds black That would have a butterfly snack Daffodil smells of amber air Refreshing butterflies software That nature preserve and provides Until the next flower ride

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Date: 7/20/2024 9:15:00 PM
'Blonde ambition natural ammunition' - straight out of Dolly Parton's playbook, she of the 'weapons of mass distraction.' Quite a line there, Karen. Kudos, Gershon
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/20/2024 11:33:00 PM
Thank you for reading Gershon!
Date: 7/20/2024 4:19:00 PM
what a charming descriptive poem Karen i especially love "Daffodil smells of amber air" hugs Jan xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/20/2024 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Jan!
Date: 7/20/2024 10:31:00 AM
Great alliteration and love the use of flowers in your poem..
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/20/2024 11:51:00 AM
Thank you for reading SO!

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