Daffodil

Dilly O daffodil! Day is sunny and bright. Driven by zephyr winds. Delight of fairy wings. Dolorous on the dirt. Dainty one lies below. Drizzling on cherub cheeks.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:54:00 PM

A delightful cheerful write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, Kim! Love that we share the same name! :)

Sam Scott

Date: 9/14/2023 5:19:00 AM

I have a lot to learn on how to do these - "Drizzling on cherub cheeks" conjures up a fountain of images, so lovely. Well deserved placement, Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2023 6:12:00 AM

Thank you, Sam! Big smiles :)

Paige Hind

Date: 9/12/2023 12:39:00 PM

This was very a creative and lovely writing, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2023 4:25:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 5:53:00 PM

Nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2023 6:54:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2023 1:20:00 PM

what a sweet poem Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2023 3:16:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Jan!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/10/2023 4:45:00 AM

"Drizzling on cherub cheeks." So original and delightful. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2023 10:14:00 AM

Thank you!

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/10/2023 3:24:00 AM

This is such a great poetic write Kim. Love the line, ‘Drizzling on cherub cheeks’. So creative. Good luck in the competition. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/10/2023 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Christina! So glad you liked it! :)