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Daffodil

Dilly O daffodil!
Day is sunny and bright.
Driven by zephyr winds.
Delight of fairy wings.
Dolorous on the dirt.
Dainty one lies below.
Drizzling on cherub cheeks.

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2023

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Kim Merryman Date: 9/15/2023 7:54:00 PM A delightful cheerful write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/16/2023 6:13:00 AM Thank you, Kim! Love that we share the same name! :)

Sam Scott Date: 9/14/2023 5:19:00 AM I have a lot to learn on how to do these - "Drizzling on cherub cheeks" conjures up a fountain of images, so lovely. Well deserved placement, Kim :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/16/2023 6:12:00 AM Thank you, Sam! Big smiles :)

Paige Hind Date: 9/12/2023 12:39:00 PM This was very a creative and lovely writing, Kim! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/12/2023 4:25:00 PM Thank you, Paige!

Joseph May Date: 9/11/2023 5:53:00 PM Nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/11/2023 6:54:00 PM Thank you, Joe!

Jan Allison Date: 9/11/2023 1:20:00 PM what a sweet poem Kim:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/11/2023 3:16:00 PM Thank you, sweet Jan!

Joe Dimino Date: 9/10/2023 4:45:00 AM "Drizzling on cherub cheeks." So original and delightful. Love it! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 10:14:00 AM Thank you!

Christina Bowring Date: 9/10/2023 3:24:00 AM This is such a great poetic write Kim. Love the line, ‘Drizzling on cherub cheeks’. So creative. Good luck in the competition. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 4:43:00 AM Thank you, Christina! So glad you liked it! :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/10/2023 1:31:00 AM Charming Pleaides, dear Kim. A mixture of reality and fantasy composed in such flowing verse. Best for a win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 4:43:00 AM Thank you, my dear friend!

Karen Croft Date: 9/10/2023 12:05:00 AM Beautiful sunny poem that would make any day beight Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 4:43:00 AM Thank you, Karen! :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/9/2023 6:41:00 PM Kim, this is really beautiful~~vividly descriptive and so charming. Janice Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 4:54:00 AM Thank you so much, Janice! Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/10/2023 4:43:00 AM Thank you so much, Janice!

Jerry Brotherton Date: 9/9/2023 5:36:00 PM A delightful Pleiades dear Kim. 'Dilly O Daffodil'. Makes me want to jump rope to the tune of this one. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/9/2023 5:37:00 PM Thank you!