Daffodil

Dilly O daffodil!
Day is sunny and bright.
Driven by zephyr winds.
Delight of fairy wings.
Dolorous on the dirt.
Dainty one lies below.
Drizzling on cherub cheeks.

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Kim Merryman

September 15, 2023 at 7:54 PM

A delightful cheerful write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

September 16, 2023 at 6:13 AM

Thank you, Kim! Love that we share the same name! :)

Sam Scott

September 14, 2023 at 5:19 AM

I have a lot to learn on how to do these - "Drizzling on cherub cheeks" conjures up a fountain of images, so lovely. Well deserved placement, Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 16, 2023 at 6:12 AM

Thank you, Sam! Big smiles :)

Paige Hind

September 12, 2023 at 12:39 PM

This was very a creative and lovely writing, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

September 12, 2023 at 4:25 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Joseph May

September 11, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues

September 11, 2023 at 6:54 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Jan Allison

September 11, 2023 at 1:20 PM

what a sweet poem Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

September 11, 2023 at 3:16 PM

Thank you, sweet Jan!

Joseph P. DiMino

September 10, 2023 at 4:45 AM

"Drizzling on cherub cheeks." So original and delightful. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues

September 10, 2023 at 10:14 AM

Thank you!

Christina Bowring

September 10, 2023 at 3:24 AM

This is such a great poetic write Kim. Love the line, ‘Drizzling on cherub cheeks’. So creative. Good luck in the competition. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 10, 2023 at 4:43 AM

Thank you, Christina! So glad you liked it! :)