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~9/9/23

Daffodil

Daffodill sheer trumpets
Dearest friendships you gift
Doused miles of sweet scent                      
Dozens charm in bouquets    
Darned bright in raven hair
Deck gardens in yellow                                
Delicate fresh flower

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Sotto Poet

September 11, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Anaya, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions and shades. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, that it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting.

I Am Anaya

September 11, 2023 at 1:16 PM

Your beautiful comments are the encouragement I need and satisfactorily edifying especially for my morality. Thank you, Sotto Poet much appreciated. Anaya

Hiya Sharma

September 10, 2023 at 6:10 AM

Oh woww, this is such a splendid and heartfelt take for the pleiades form contest and you've brilliantly reflected your wise poetical eloquence dear! The lines are scented with the delightful ambience of daffodils and my heart feels mesmerized by your eloquent words.. "Dearest friendships you gift" Very true.. "Darned bright jn raven hair", "dozens charm in bouquets" You've really shown a very cosmic vividness here and I'm in awe of your beautiful talent.. Just wow :)

I Am Anaya

September 10, 2023 at 3:13 PM

Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D

Christina Bowring

September 10, 2023 at 3:31 AM

This is beautiful Anaya. ‘Darned bright in raven hair’. Glorious! Your poetry is so creative, imaginative, well crafted and inspiring. Good luck in the competition. Blessings to you.

I Am Anaya

September 10, 2023 at 2:18 PM

Thank you, Christina, it's an honor coming from you an amazing poetess! Thanks for the luck...warmest wishes...

Victor Buhagiar

September 10, 2023 at 1:27 AM

Splendid Pleiades, dear Anaya. Excellent use of sight and smell. Daffodils are such lovely flowers. Best for a win.

I Am Anaya

September 10, 2023 at 3:08 PM

They are, dear Victor. Yellow flowers mean friendship...I give you my bouquet. ;D

Speaks Volumes

September 9, 2023 at 8:05 PM

This is lovely Anaya. It reads like a beautiful poem, even if it wasn't compelled to begin with D. BOL it will do well. Best wishes my friend. SV

I Am Anaya

September 10, 2023 at 3:17 PM

Thank you, S.V. it means a lot coming from you. Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D

Ink Empress

September 9, 2023 at 7:26 PM

Ah this is absolutely stunning. How gorgeous is your flow, seamless and i love every line here especially deck line and friendships. Deep and heartfelt this is. One could write so creatively for pleiades you’ve shown that. Goodluck for the contest Stay blessed talented poetess

I Am Anaya

September 10, 2023 at 3:16 PM

Yellow flowers symbolize freindship and cheers and an exchange with friends means a bond of trust and affection. A bouquet for you my poetess friend.. ;D

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