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Pleiades Contest~sponsor: Joseph May ~ 9/9/23

Daffodil

Delightful garden bloom
Dazzling colored flower
Delicate stemmed petals
Double-headed beauty
Decorates yards in Spring
Drink in its fragrant scent
'Daffodils' by Wordsworth

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2023

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September 15, 2023 at 7:25 PM

You described daffodils beautifully, Lin! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

September 15, 2023 at 7:33 PM

Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Kim.

September 11, 2023 at 8:44 AM

Lovely write Lin, Congrats on your win

September 11, 2023 at 10:27 AM

Thank you very much for the placement, Joseph.

September 11, 2023 at 2:08 AM

Simply stunningly breathtaking, Lin:)

September 11, 2023 at 6:02 AM

I appreciate your comments, Jo.

September 10, 2023 at 11:44 PM

Beautiful

September 11, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Thank you.

September 9, 2023 at 5:56 PM

Wrap us in imagery, then scent and hand us Wordsworth!

September 9, 2023 at 6:09 PM

They all go hand in hand so well. I couldn't ignore Wordsworth's hand. ;-)Thank you very much, Kim!

September 9, 2023 at 4:04 PM

Nice one, Lin. Never tried one on these plywood oldies or whatever this form is called… perhaps you’ll inspire me to have a go.

September 9, 2023 at 4:54 PM

'plywood oldie.' LOL Terry. It's not as dafficult as you think. Go for it and thanks for making me smile.

September 9, 2023 at 9:36 AM

A perfect Pleiades Lin , i love the vivid description of the flower and of course the Wordsworth reference:-) hugs Jan xx

September 9, 2023 at 9:49 AM

Merci, douce souer. That doesn't mean pooping in the sewer. LOL it means 'sweet sister.'

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