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Pleiades Contest~sponsor: Joseph May ~ 9/9/23

Delightful garden bloom Dazzling colored flower Delicate stemmed petals Double-headed beauty Decorates yards in Spring Drink in its fragrant scent 'Daffodils' by Wordsworth

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/15/2023 7:25:00 PM

You described daffodils beautifully, Lin! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Lin Lane
Date: 9/15/2023 7:33:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind thoughts, Kim.

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 8:44:00 AM

Lovely write Lin, Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/11/2023 10:27:00 AM

Thank you very much for the placement, Joseph.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/11/2023 2:08:00 AM

Simply stunningly breathtaking, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/11/2023 6:02:00 AM

I appreciate your comments, Jo.

Curie Stark

Date: 9/10/2023 11:44:00 PM

Beautiful

Lin Lane
Date: 9/11/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2023 5:56:00 PM

Wrap us in imagery, then scent and hand us Wordsworth!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2023 6:09:00 PM

They all go hand in hand so well. I couldn't ignore Wordsworth's hand. ;-)Thank you very much, Kim!

Terry Flood

Date: 9/9/2023 4:04:00 PM

Nice one, Lin. Never tried one on these plywood oldies or whatever this form is called… perhaps you’ll inspire me to have a go.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2023 4:54:00 PM

'plywood oldie.' LOL Terry. It's not as dafficult as you think. Go for it and thanks for making me smile.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2023 9:36:00 AM

A perfect Pleiades Lin , i love the vivid description of the flower and of course the Wordsworth reference:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/9/2023 9:49:00 AM

Merci, douce souer. That doesn't mean pooping in the sewer. LOL it means 'sweet sister.'