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For decades I watched you toil
Modestly and unpretentiously
Life’s ups and downs
Not changing you one iota

A solid man with your integrity intact
No matter what came your way
Being your own master
And your own judge
Demanding and fair

Your heart into everything you did
You led by example
With principles and ethics
That’s how I learned the most valuable lesson
The one worth learning most of all

At the end of this whirlwind journey we call life
We will all stand alone to face our Maker
And show the integrity that’s in our heart



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A SIMPLE MAN~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on October 8, 2018 for contest IN RESPONSE TO IF (RUDYARD KIPLING'S FAMOUS POEM 'IF') sponsored by SILENT ONE  -  RANKED 2ND

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/26/2018 10:16:00 AM
Congrats Line-- clearly is shown the respect and love you have for your father
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, LJ.
Date: 11/26/2018 12:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, |sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Line, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 10:16:00 AM
Great take on the contest Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, SO. Appreciate the podium finish.
Date: 10/10/2018 1:51:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! Brought warm thoughts of mey own dad who was very similar to yours. They don't make me like those any more...<3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/25/2018 11:44:00 AM
Great Job in this contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:55:00 AM
Terrific dedication to an exemplary man... absolutely inspiring! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/8/2018 3:27:00 PM
An amazing, dedication Line, love this, the poetry is so powerful.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Harry.

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