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Dad's Lesson

For years I watched you toil Modestly and unpretentiously Life’s ups and downs Not changing you one iota A solid man With your integrity intact No matter what came your way Being your own master And your own judge Demanding and fair Your heart into everything you did You led by example With principles and ethics That’s how I learned the most valuable lesson The one worth learning most of all At the end of this whirlwind journey we call life We will all stand alone to face our Maker And show the integrity that’s in our heart Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~A SIMPLE MAN~ 2020 Submitted on October 8, 2018 for contest IN RESPONSE TO IF (RUDYARD KIPLING'S FAMOUS POEM 'IF') sponsored by SILENT ONE - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 11/26/2018 10:16:00 AM
Congrats Line-- clearly is shown the respect and love you have for your father
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, LJ.
Date: 11/26/2018 12:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "In response to IF ...." poems, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/26/2018 7:15:00 AM
Thank you, |sunshine. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 6:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Line, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2018 10:16:00 AM
Great take on the contest Line.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, SO. Appreciate the podium finish.
Date: 10/10/2018 1:51:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! Brought warm thoughts of mey own dad who was very similar to yours. They don't make me like those any more...<3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/25/2018 11:44:00 AM
Great Job in this contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2018 7:43:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.
Date: 10/9/2018 11:55:00 AM
Terrific dedication to an exemplary man... absolutely inspiring! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/9/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/8/2018 3:27:00 PM
An amazing, dedication Line, love this, the poetry is so powerful.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Harry.

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