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Dads Favorite Child

Our brother up stairs we don’t like.
This Chip he does love is a pike!
     He plays with him games
     forsaking us dames.
Computer you go on a hike!

7/31/2021

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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August 3, 2021 at 8:21 AM

Good one, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

August 2, 2021 at 2:51 AM

Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!

August 2, 2021 at 9:21 AM

Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

July 31, 2021 at 10:45 PM

An enjoyable limerick. Hugs.

August 2, 2021 at 9:21 AM

Thank you!

July 31, 2021 at 8:39 PM

Computer -- turn into a bike! Whatever's needed to dig brother out of his room. ~ gw

August 2, 2021 at 9:22 AM

Whatever it takes…lol

Caren Krutsinger

July 31, 2021 at 7:46 PM

So timely Kim; many young men are spending their days online in their rooms!

August 2, 2021 at 9:22 AM

Too much!

Phyllis Babcock

July 31, 2021 at 10:46 AM

Enjoyed this limerick and yes seems to be that way these days. love phyl

August 2, 2021 at 9:22 AM

Thank you!

July 31, 2021 at 10:29 AM

good one Kim, sadly its a sign of the times though isn;t it:-( hugs jan xx

August 2, 2021 at 9:22 AM

For sure!

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