Daddy's Little Girl Has Grown

Dad your so insensitive
You need to stop and let me live
Not controlling me anymore
Or I'll sneak right out the door
Never returning in your life
Soon I will be someone's wife
So don't treat me like a child
Your attitude needs to be mild
Not obtrusive, mean or strong
Or it wont be very long
Till I can not handle it
Something in me he has lit
A bond is forming that 's not weak
My womanhood is on the peak
So let me go with happy tears
You've fathered me throughout the years
Now I need to fly alone
Your baby girl has finally grown
Wanting a new life and story
Your guidance led me to glory
Finding the man of my dreams
Impossible as it might seem
There's nothing to hold me back
Your little girl will never lack
Love, I will have lots and lots
From my daddy and sweetheart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/14/2014 1:46:00 AM
Robin, a nice lovely winning poem. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/13/2014 5:17:00 PM
it is hard to let go, but even daddy's have to. Great win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2014 12:40:00 PM
dads are always too protective,robin.. beauitiful!!.. sweet congrats on your well-deserved award!.. huggs
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Date: 3/13/2014 11:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win Robin, It was nice to get to know Daddy's little girl.......Hugs......Roger
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:57:00 AM
Enjoyed the emotional write and congrats on the fine win, robin
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend rovin. Thank you so much for your full support! Biggest hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:51:00 PM
Good way to tell dad straight and to the point but with love too...luv,Deb
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:43:00 PM
Nice way to tell us how the rosebud has fully bloomed. Good descriptiveness here.
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Date: 3/2/2014 6:59:00 PM
This is great. I can see myself as the dad here...I still have a couple of years but getting close....Tim
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