Daddy's Girl

She was a Daddy's girl
The apple of his eye
Somehow things change
as the years go by

His hugs and kisses
Vanished like the sun
He became serious
Instead of being fun

She wanted to be noticed
Purple hair and pierced nose
She started wearing black
From her head to her toes

He said he was leaving
A new family he had
He said not to worry
He'd always be her dad

She didn't shed a tear
As daddy walked away
Still pain needs expression
She cuts her skin each day

If you see her tatoo
It's a black broken heart
Printed with Daddy's Girl
Her life expressed through art


I wrote this one for Donna Jones
to answer some of the questions
she had about my Watch poem.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mccall Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Very sad but true words spoken. Children may not speak of their pain but its there. Great write.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:35 AM
Thanks for commenting Lisa.
Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 4:34 PM
Thankd for this beautiful poem..I can feel so much of this girl 's pain as if such words were for real.Touched deeply..to my favs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Aww thanks Charmain, I am honored.
Thomas Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Goodmorning Richard tgif:) Thanks for your comments, have a great weekend....cherie
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:09 PM
I hope you have a great weekend as well.
Thomas Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:59 AM
Wow this is such a important message. On so many levels. The light gone into darkness. Relationships broken, the family unit lost. The importance of the fathers role, is vital in a young girls life. It shapes her relationship, in finding a partner. Great write!! :) tyfs....hugz cherie
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Thanks Cherie, you are kind.
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Sad that these things happen but they do..The question is what does the rest of society do to help ease this young lady into a more fulfilled life?..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the congrats..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 7:12 PM
Good question Sara.
Situation Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 2:20 AM
Very well expresed this truth about daughters. Funny I saw one with purple hair today. They change there hair with the sagging pants. Where is the romance? We don't give a chance.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 2:23 AM
I am colored blind so I can't fully appreciate the purple hair. Thanks for visiting and commenting.
Seal Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Think you cracked this one Rick, parenting skills seem to be in short supply nowadays. Society is getting ever more selfish. Well done write. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 1:46 AM
With some families it has always been in short supply.
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 3:46 PM
wow, bl is right. This one is poignant and a joy to read something well written on this topic!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Devnath  Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 3:19 PM
Poignant poem. I agree with our friend Dona that you have poured emotion in to the pain. Nice job done here, my friend. Loved always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Thanka bl you are most kind.
Hamilton Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 10:21 AM
so terribly sad Richard it is the children who suffer Shadow x smile hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Unfortunately that is true. Thanks for commenting.
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Came to reread this already Richard...you really dissected the teenager of today....could be anybody boy or girl..any town....and what's worse..parents might not even notice...think its normal behavior for teens...not see the cuts...hopefully care..great job.....
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:08 AM
Crazy busy day yesterday, sorry I didn't have a chance to respond. Thanks for asking the question and helping me bring this character to life.
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:26 PM
Aahhhhhh...nice job!!!!!!!!! Loved how you poured the emotion into the pain....and thanks for the note....guess I'm too much of a bookworm...thanks for wrapping that up...:-) :-) :-)
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:29 PM
Fav....
Jones Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:28 PM
You're sweet for the dedication...I'm smiling....
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:28 AM
- Beautiful..... but also so sad ...... well written Richard! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Oops message was meant for Eileen
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:11 AM
When I think of you I think of Sheena warrior princess for some reason. I'm glad you have a daddy who treats you well.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Thanks Anne Lise
Manassian Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 11:16 AM
LOVELY....Your words really had a great flow here...and were so so well expressed of the longing in this girl's heart for her father's love. Everyone knows I'm a Daddy's girl....He made me think I'm a princess....He spoiled me. He still looks out for me....calls me....Unfortunately, the world doesn't think that way....I'm a princess only in his eyes......I was going to write a poem on this, and was absolutely shocked when I saw your poem title...On the same wave length! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 7:13 AM
When I think of you I think of Sheena Warrior Princess. I am also glad you have a dad who treats you like a princess.
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Very deep write expressing the inner feelings with sadness, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Dr.Ram.
Tacito Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:56 AM
The song "Fallen Angel" from Motley Crue comes to mind as I read this. This had some very deep, layered lines. Very well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Drake. Hope all is well with you.
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