Daddy the Drunk

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Drunken daddy 
Late 
By a weekend 
No money again 
Mummy’s furious 

Sunday night she hides 
Fat sniper 
Behind the sofa 
Lights off 
Breadknife in hand 
Last chance expired 

A quarter past ten 
The window rattles 
Curtains flap 
Real men use doors 
Two skinny legs push through a tiny window 
Then an **** follows 
Mummy gets up slowly 

‘Caught you, you bastard! This is the last time! You don’t get to sleep in my bed! This is not a hotel! Go back to the pub and live with your ****ing friends!’ 

To encourage him out she pokes the knife in his leg 
It slips 
Upwards 
And enters his backside instead 
Severed flesh 
A red patch grows on his filthy work pants 

‘You ****ing psycho *****!’ 

It does the trick 
He takes off like a dog out of a trap 
And mummy runs to the front door and shouts 

‘I’m sorry, Love, please forgive me! Come back!’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/21/2012 8:43:00 AM
Dear Cheryle, Oh the saga of an excuse to run away and then the spouse wondering if she can go it alone. Such sadness in the hoopla. love, Kathy
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Cheryle Sanders
Date: 2/21/2012 9:00:00 AM
thank you for taking time to read this poem cc x
Date: 2/15/2012 2:25:00 PM
There is very old saying you know , never trust a person who doesn't drink ! It's all a matter of self control some can't do it !
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Date: 2/15/2012 2:28:00 PM
I love it when my writes provoke a reaction, thanks for your input. cc x
Date: 2/15/2012 12:43:00 PM
Smile ˜ Give Me Drama, Or Give Me War * Personally, I Myself Have Not Had A Drink In Two Years ˜ Less A Stretch of A Few Months During 2009, Not A Drink Since Memorial Day of 2005 * Smile, But I Know All of The Fallouts That Countless Face Amid These Collateral Destructions Which Beset This Their Beautiful Hearts During This Collectives Molding Moment In Time * Tell Mummie to Be Strong ˜ Love, John!:) *
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Cheryle Sanders
Date: 2/15/2012 12:47:00 PM
she left him a few years later ~ thanks for your comment cc x
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