Daddy I
daddy I sure do remember
how you were so very proud
how you were so very virile
how you were so very strong
daddy I got a weird feeling
that something somehow isn't right
that something somehow's out of place
that something somehow doesn't fit
daddy I was just wondering
is this what it's really about
is this what it really comes to
is this how it really all ends
daddy I got a strange question
why do you stare straight ahead
why do your eyes look so vacant
why do you not know my name...
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