Daddy Cares

May be I think, I’m grown up and I can decide.
It’s a myth in my mind so must be kept aside.
May be I’m respected and they take my advice.
I’m telling you this just to be precise.
Daddy thinks I’m still a child and always playing games
Anyone can befool me is what he claims.

“Don’t chat with strangers and
Personal details you don’t send.
And no need to tell that you are a mother of two 
My baby, life is not as easy as playing – ‘loo’ ”,
Is what daddy advised, when I said
“My poems have got some comments on internet.”

Date:13/13/14 

* loo - A game of cards.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/13/2016 12:54:00 AM
Archana, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the Dad Contest! Thanks for sharing with us.
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Date: 1/9/2016 1:15:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Well-deserved win!! :)
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Date: 1/7/2016 11:19:00 AM
Wonderful tribute for your dad :-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:17:00 AM
Great inspiration from your verse.... Congrats Archana, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/6/2016 11:57:00 AM
Archana, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 1/6/2016 4:11:00 AM
Daddy really did seem to care and you have made him very happy.
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:08:00 PM
Archana thank you for being in my contest I thoroughly enjoyed your tribute to your father....I am sure your poetry will receive many good comments.....thanks again
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Archana Garg
Date: 1/6/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thanks for throwing such a wonderful contest and also for judging it so liberally............. Really enjoyed all the poems
Date: 10/27/2014 7:44:00 AM
My daughter is 26 years old, married with a 7 year old son but she is still my baby-girl.. Always will be . Your dad loves you and expresses it in his concerns. Great write and giving your poem a super 7 rating.. Enjoyed reading it this fine morn!
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Date: 10/28/2014 11:02:00 AM
Parental love is the greatest love in the world since it is unconditional and unlimited . Thanks for rating my poem so high.. // :D
Date: 3/21/2014 10:23:00 PM
A blessed child you are! For Having such a father and for expressing through this poem. Very Nice._ Neelam
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Date: 3/15/2014 3:18:00 AM
How sweetly expressed how daddy cares for his lil girl... really cute
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Date: 3/13/2014 4:47:00 PM
You will always be his little girl.. Embrace it... It is his ay of telling you he loves you......Tim
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:47:00 AM
This made me giggle Archana. We are always going to be 'daddy's little girl' no matter our age or marital status. i am just thankful I still have mine he's 90 this year. Loved the poem. Jan xxx
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