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Daddy

I vaguely remember a father. One that screamed, yelled, cursed. Flung bottles around, here and there. Knocked around furniture. Knocked around momma, like furniture. But sometimes he was nice. He’d give me toys. Candy, chocolate, a Kite. One day he never came back. “Momma?” I puzzled, I was only seven. My mother still loved me then. She tried to change. Tried. Not really. But she was better. ‘Momma?” I tried again. This time she looked up from the table. Tears streaming her face, Like rivers of pain. “Where’s daddy?” I asked. Shy. “He’s dead! Dead! God took him from me! Not that he was any good… But he was all I had! Your daddy’s dead!” She screamed. That was when, Her hate for me, Really began.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/2/2015 2:35:00 PM
I like it, the word choices are excellent and the theme is consistent throughout. You have managed to capture human frailties and emotions and weave them into a dark poem that is easy to relate to and understand. Good work. Emile #7
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Date: 2/19/2015 4:42:00 PM
Such a deep and sad write Paige:-( hugs jan xx
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Paige Clinton
Date: 3/3/2015 12:52:00 PM
Thanks!

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