Dad Was a Deaf Crab

Dad was a deaf crab limerick Dad was a deaf crab very bad My mom was naturally sad Uca the fiddler The greatest riddler Riddled dad's deafness- deadbeat dad © Rajat kanti Chakrabarty 12/02/2014

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/2/2014 8:38:00 PM

Hmmn...do I sense something more, something deeper behind the deliberately funny way, this funny guy tried to express his thoughts, do I hear a sigh? Certainly hope it ISN'T your poem, Rajat. You're just the storyteller here, right? This is very good though, thank you for sharing. :) Kim

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/3/2014 1:41:00 AM

Kim, it's pure fun...nothing more than that intended.Kim, you are a good reader.I am lucky. You are an inspiration, Kim . God bless. Hugs!>>>> RAJAT

Eve Roper

Date: 12/2/2014 12:47:00 PM

your limericks are really enjoyable to read. hugs my friend eve

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/3/2014 1:42:00 AM

Love Eve, God bless XXXX rajat