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Dad

His Dad had been fighting for years. Never knowing when to take up arms, But always needing to be prepared for war. The pain would begin slowly, Only then to accelerate into mass fury. Small heart attacks had become frequent battles. It may have been arrogant on his part, But he believed if the big one hit, His presence could be his Dads safe net. He found himself spending more evenings at home. And on the night it happened he was there, Watching Dateline on the couch a mere ten feet away. He yelled for Mom while grabbing the aspirin. There was no use, it happened too fast. His Dads body lay limp, and the war was done. Watching his Dad pass will not haunt him. For he knows his presence brought serenity, He has far too many good memories to allow distress. His Dad is now with Jesus. The battles are no more, Praise God.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/12/2008 6:13:00 PM
AWWWW!!! This is so sad may God be with you and I will do anything you need me to do to help you out. . .
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Date: 10/17/2008 10:36:00 AM
awe heartfelt memories, devotion, and hope!! thanks for sharing and creating this!!
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Date: 10/9/2008 2:36:00 PM
HI GUY! I THANK THE HOLY SPIRIT FOR THIS PIECE DELIVERED THRU YOU. AMEN? I BELIEVE THAT WE ARE SIMILAR, AS IN OUR INSPIRATION IS THE LORD, & THIS TEMPERAL ASSIGNMENT CALLED LIFE. CERTAINLY, DAD'S LAST BREATH ON EARTH WAS HIS FIRST BREATH IN HEAVEN, IN THE PRESENCE OF JESUS.
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Date: 10/7/2008 9:25:00 PM
I believe this poem reminds us of a hope reaching beyond these medial lives we live. Even through the pain of watching his father pass, this character chooses to praise God for their time together and for taking his Dad to Jesus.
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