D-E-P-R-E-S-S-I-O-N

d-e-p-r-e-s-s-i-o-n

doesn’t know what nerve end hurts.
easygoing he’s not.
pleasing himself? he fo-
rgot the rules.
eagle-eyed demonic-
s attack, never giving any
slack. they’re in
it to win it,     but G-
od 
never forgets...the cross firmly placed.

9/4/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 9/25/2019 7:52:00 AM
All of us get depressed Kim if you don't your not human, I always look at people who are worse off then me like children in hospitals with no hope. Then I think I am not so bad off. great write my friend!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/25/2019 8:36:00 AM
For sure we all have times of depression. Some live with it all the time...addictions spurring on crimes and then shame. I pray for those who suffer.
Date: 9/11/2019 8:46:00 PM
You have captured the essence of it depression ah yes but your faith is a feat not to messed with thanks for inspiration through this write you are well gift in forms of poetry ~ Matt
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 9/4/2019 6:47:00 PM
Well, even a very religious person can become depressed. Satan is a cunning foe, not easily dismissed... :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 6:49:00 PM
This is so true. I know a few.
Date: 9/4/2019 10:37:00 AM
you have captured the hold depression has on its victims well in this one Kim...a battle they will always fight... good write! :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 12:55:00 PM
sadly so... Thanks, sweet Sandra!
Date: 9/4/2019 5:09:00 AM
In LOVE you must be strong...the battle is fierce...and depressing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 7:46:00 AM
It is a tough battle. Some of us have momentary battles but some fight an all out war.
Date: 9/4/2019 4:25:00 AM
Good message in this. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/4/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota! This world has many curses but the victory belongs to the Lord.
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