Notes About The Poem

I can't get even close

Cute

You’re such a cute guy!!
You always look relaxed and detached
and a little confused or bemused.
It makes me want to enlist in assisting.
Your lips look seriously delicious.
Your eyes are green and serene.
You’re simply beautiful  sigh
(Damn these binoculars are good!)
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Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 4:49 AM
A tender tease--beautifully done!
Vionet Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 5:26 AM
I LOVE hearing you say that - it was my intention - Thank you =]
Watt Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 11:39 AM
I love your word pairings: relaxed / detached; confused / bemused; enlist / assisting; seriously / delicious; green / serene. Enjoyed the read.
Vionet Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Thank you =]
Gondolf Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Oh my, a peeping Anais...shame on you ;)
Vionet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 2:56 PM
It's like I can look in the store window, I jusy can't BUY!
Leffanta Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 1:12 PM
Spot on! Aloha! Rico
Vionet Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 2:56 PM
Thank you Rico =]
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